Haiku - A Set of Five (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Reginald Birch (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2005

I have often wondered about Haiku, it sounds so painful, but with these five short verses I can relate.
Thank you Lori,
Reg.

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on September 4, 2005

I love these and admire anyone who can do them, it's something i've never tried, best leave that to people that can do it justice, people like yourself lori, each and everyone here a gem, take care...Mark x

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 27, 2005

A wonderful gift of lovely haiku. Thank you, Lori. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 24, 2005

Rumble Thunder Patient Crows(Pack Rats) In Storm!

TRASK

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

oh very nice there all so good.
Love the thunder clouds... Great

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 23, 2005

A complete story in each one, Lori: "flash fiction" at it's best! :)) TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

this is one of the best sets of haiku that you have shared with us. I cannot pick a favorite because they are all great. They all speak volumes!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Lori,

GAD these are awesome haiku! I love all of them, but had to chuckle at

"flying home-
my luggage
stays on vacation"

How true! How 'bout a role reversal? The luggage can fly home while I stay here! LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Just amazing...I get soooo confused with haiku's/

When I counting syllables I always get either one extra or ... me just plain stupid!!

Like on this one I get

thunderclouds- 4
empty words - 2
speaking promise -6

Am I stupid or am I STUPID??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Excellent haikus, Lori... each one of them paints a picture. I love the skipping rocks one, and the strawberries. They are all great!! I enjoyed!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Lovely creative imagery in haiku's Lori ... I enjoyed each of them

peace, Carole

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

all are well written ... enjoyed ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Lori your inventiveness has no bounds! Great Ku!

Eileen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

My Passion is strawberries- w/ cream or not. Lori- I like the last Kue alot- Perfection they must be- to be enjoyed and savored as your Kue Poem did for me. I like how you get my mind thinkinggg.. Thanks- The imagery is strong on them all- This I am keeping-WArmly-Sheee

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Oh yes, I'll have to tell a few of
their rumbles of thunder-
rolling from their lips.
3 is sad too often..
the fishermen can go elsewhere, hee, hee
Great reads Lori.......

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Excellent Ku's Lori...loved the last one...All speak truths.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

You've accomplished your Haiku mission once again, Lori; like them all, especially the first one which is quite powerful.

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Excellent. You are a Haiku heavyweight, Lori

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

These are good Lori, I done my best to choose a favorite, but it didn't happen.
I like to read your ku's slowly, so I can digest them fully.
Great work!

Lisa

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

This one is very open to interpretation and the reader can and does manage to draw several conclusions from it. Is your love ending because of the lying, are you taking your frustration out on the fishermen and are the patient crows a sign that there is still hope?
Hmmmnnnn interesting.
Felix

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Stop annoying the fishermen, lol. This has happened to me a few times.
Nice work

Take care

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

3 and 4, one always happens, the other is grrrreeeeat fun fun fun...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 22, 2005

Excellent set of Haiku's which is your forte.

Reviewed by Tami Ryan

Reviewed on August 21, 2005

I always enjoy reading your haiku, Lori. Each one of these made me smile for different reasons, but I have to say that (because I have such a penchant for strawberries), I enjoyed the last the most.

Hugs,
Tami