You approached the bench with this one Lori...lol :)
Great write !
EDL
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 9, 2005
Exactly! Which is why courtrooms exist, without exception, except that mostly peeps are too awed to raise the proper objections that are the reason that they are there for! Must drive judges barmy... makes them wish that they could roll up their sleeves and do the job themselves, perhaps, and get someone else to hang the scales in balance! Self-objection shows a mighty sound capacity for objective thinking in my legal books! :)) LOL Kate xx
Hey now Lori! You're just gettin' started Girl!! This is rich, like a diamond mind underneath a soybean field. It hides so much wonderful stuff aching to rise to the surface. Let me share my impressions, if I may be permitted, with much respect for what you've got here:
I have an inkling that there is so much more in the core of what you've written in each stanza that would generate at least three more stanzas for each one currently existing. You've scratched a curious surface as I read this. . . would love to see a part II about the courts, (Are we talking the nomination and swearing in of John Roberts); Mary, who was an instrument of God as our sister in humanity and not a heavenly worshipped deity; Are there hidden things about Hillary's possibly running for office as compared to the possible dictatorial way that our government is seen by so many Americans these days; and what is the question that Jesus would respond to that had nothing to do with materialism?
So many wonderful ways to see this poem. Go slow, read over and over, and put down everything your heart feels about each stanza. And get ready for the poetic ride of your life!
A great curiousity "tease" that needs to open up and show it all.
blessin's, and welcome back,
cynth'ya
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Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
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Great write !
EDL
You're making a great attorney.
Keep it that way... anyone can
be a lawyer of some kind!
- Bill
WILLIAM .......PEACE & lOVE
Regis
God bless,
Sandie.
I have an inkling that there is so much more in the core of what you've written in each stanza that would generate at least three more stanzas for each one currently existing. You've scratched a curious surface as I read this. . . would love to see a part II about the courts, (Are we talking the nomination and swearing in of John Roberts); Mary, who was an instrument of God as our sister in humanity and not a heavenly worshipped deity; Are there hidden things about Hillary's possibly running for office as compared to the possible dictatorial way that our government is seen by so many Americans these days; and what is the question that Jesus would respond to that had nothing to do with materialism?
So many wonderful ways to see this poem. Go slow, read over and over, and put down everything your heart feels about each stanza. And get ready for the poetic ride of your life!
A great curiousity "tease" that needs to open up and show it all.
blessin's, and welcome back,
cynth'ya
You always make us ponder, and are a joy to read!Thanks
for sharing!
Love,
Eileen
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
hope all is well, old friend.
TX
Hee, hee.....
About all I can say about her...
Love your wit Lori....
Hope all is well
Blimey who is this we see before us. So Hillary is a bit of a Bolsh' I assume?
Case dismissed..
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry