Four Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2006

Exceptional poetry well done.

Reviewed on January 2, 2006

Ah yes -- but could you explain the rules of Four Haiku. I fear that I have a lot to learn about poetry so any help would be appreciated.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on December 22, 2005

These are some of your best, and since I only have a small tree on my property I can relate to the first one. Right into December I'm raking leaves not my own.

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on December 20, 2005

I don't really do haiku Lori so I'll go comment on song of the hypocrite

Reviewed by Sandra Corona

Reviewed on December 19, 2005

Interesting revelation :)!
Merry Christmas!
:)Sandy

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on December 18, 2005

Watching nuts and cracking jokes if it were me... but these are sublime and gentle with a hint of autumn spice, Lori. Particularly like that nagging old owl! :)) LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

"in the park- the squirrel and i watching nuts". I agree, there are a lot of nuts in the park, and they don't grow on bushes or trees either, giggle. Nicwe kus Lori, thnx for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn and determined to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

Happy Everything!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on December 17, 2005

Sweet haiku snapshots, Lori. Thank you for sharing this lovely gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

each haiku captures the ambiance of autumn ... vivid and descriptive realism ... a joy to read ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

I just love your unique take on things Lori. It's what makes your haiku so special. All a delight to savor!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Sara Coslett

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

LOL...those nuts can get pretty squirrely too. Nice write x 4. ~ Sara

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

The first and fourth was something to smile at...lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

LOL at the first. In my garden it's like a war zone, the birds and the squirrels fighting over the nuts, and one squirel being watched by a neighbours black cat, thought had enough of this, and chased it back out and into the woods....
The harvest moon is the brightest it's been in yonks, cos it's in a closer orbit this year, and so enchanting too....

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Enjoyed them all.

LOL on that first one Lori ... I hate it when that happens!

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

The second and third haikus do it for me Lori
Have a memorable and satisfying Christmas and New Year 2006
Peter

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

These are wonderful. I especially like the touch of humor in the first one.

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

i work a convenience store, graveyard (11pm till 7 amm) i see the nuts & they are squirrley.

nice write, darlin.
TX

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

These are all soooo good, Lori. I can really relate to the first one since I have no trees and tons of leaves. The last one is really funny...love them all! Merry Christmas to you, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Wonderful capture of the sights and sounds around you and puts the reader in the picture with you.
Merry Christmas Lori,
Felix

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Truly love that last one, Lori!

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on December 16, 2005

Excellent haiku, Lori! I enjoyed them very much.

Peace. Joyce