Winter Haiku - A Set of Four (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Maria Cristina Azcona

Reviewed on March 5, 2006

I love the first one. It has The Rhythm that enjoys the heart

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Lovely and symbolically meaningful as well, Lori. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Always superb!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Four panes of a window which sheds light on the season.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Damn, but I wish I could write like this...Ed

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Send one my favorite this is a wonderful set of poems.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

These are lovely. The images are beautiful and it's fun picturing the snow. But today, we're topping out at 70 degrees and it's really nice.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on January 12, 2006

Lori,
I'm not choosing! I liked them all. You do these so well, that with only a few words you paint an entire muriel.
Loved them!
Now if we could only get it to snow in Tx...or just rain would be sufficient.

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Enjoyed them all...great imagery Lori!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Robin Ouzman Hislop

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

a snow for all reasons...v eloquent & elegant which always makes your writing appreciable saludos

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Unique as only you can write them. I like the way you used the meter; a far cry from the sometimes stale 5-7-5.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

I am particularly drawn to three and four Lori
Another display of evocative haikus
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

See, feel and smell that first snow. Good.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

So wonderful the laughter that the white stuff brings to children and children at heart, nice write Lori.

Felix

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Independent from one another, each of these four functions to their fullest seasonal capability as a whole. You're at peace with nature, Lori, appreciating what has become stale for others who miss it all. Peaceful days to you, Lori. Be well, be warm. Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Clear and crisp images of winter and the trail of our lives as we travel through the season. ~~Carmen

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on January 11, 2006

Brilliant cycle of images as well as a wise metaphorical commentary on the cycles of our lives. Thanks for sharing the beauty.