The Call (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2002

My beautiful sister with such a kind heart. Your words show your beauty inside out. You are excellent in your words an thoughts, continue to write your heart belongs to God.

Reviewed by Romantic Scorpio (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2002

Very mesmerizng, an enchanting pondering

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on June 20, 2002

I like it! Just remember, we judge ourselves much harsher than anyone else will or does. Try everything...try anything! This poem is great!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

I just love this...I think you should try a few more like this one...this is a powerful piece!

Reviewed by Jo Janoski

Reviewed on June 19, 2002

This is great!

Reviewed by Bryt Eyz (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Thought provoking...and I'm glad you shared it. I usually write about lost love as well, but often take a dip in other wells. :) Thanks for reading my work on occasion. Have a great day, girl.

Reviewed by Shezray Faisal

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Ahhh...very unusual and thought provoking...

Reviewed by Heather Bauer (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

I thought it was great.

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

Hi Lori,
No matter what you
write, it is always
beautiful...

I love your comment on
mine
"The Famous Black Widow"
I hear you loud and clear on that one...
I am hoping that my
ex will soon meet her.....hahahaha

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 18, 2002

This was just exceptional~

Reviewed by Andrew Rafalski

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

this is powerful

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

wonderful poem...

Reviewed by Peter Adotey Addo

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

love your poem ...beautiful and fantastic..great work

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Lovely writing here Lori!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Lori, never judge yourself...this is an exceptional write as is most of your work...please write whatever is in your heart to do...awesome...!!!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

wow, i thought i was the only one with those guys going at it every night in my bedroom. i'm almost at the point where i don't care who wins, if i can just sleep

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Very powerful writing--great expressions...
"Heaven and hell
spar in my dreams"

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Pardon me if this sound like a cliche
But that was "Pure Poetry" you write so very well no matter what the subject is
you pull the reader in and hold them until you are through

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Wonderful write. I really enjoyed this.

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Lori,
Wonderful visualization and it appears that you have a knack for more than just writing about lost love.
J.

Reviewed by Larry Skahill

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

different is great...I love "pernicious demons"

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

I loved this one, Lori. A beautiful poem. Some see a cross, others a tree, I see Lori Lynn playful and free. :) Great poem.

Reviewed by Tomas Ughdair (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Hi Lori,
Write what you like,for what it is worth I thought that was brilliant.
Morchuis

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

I love everyword of this!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

It makes no difference what you write...it is heartfelt and I can feel it through your words...and that is what makes you a better writer than you think...you are a true poet...sing from your heart what you feel as you always have Do not let it go and you can create anything...of that, I have no doubt!!!
Amor

Reviewed by Sanilnath

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Hello Lori,

Love is never lost. Look at the heart u holds . U can still see the Love . u can still feel the trueness in ur heart. I am sure u will surely write more about love and think more about Love. Keep urself happy and smiling ... which is most important for a good output from a good poet like you ... Wish u all happiness .. Keep always smiling .. I believe when a poet is sad it keep the readers too in sadness.

Reading this poem make me sad bcoz i feel u were sad at heart writing this. But this is a Excellent write. I am proud u are a good writer. Keep writing more ...

With Love for friendship
Sanil

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

I loved it Lori! A wonderful write...
Tiana ;-p

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

Noooo!! I loved this Lori...it depicts your mind so well and there's enough of lost love around hehe. I really like reading such poetry because at places, it helps me identify with others' insanity :) Excellent!

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2002

this was great verse Lori,,your words are from the heart and that makes them beautiful,,your friend,,Charlie

Reviewed by Charles Mann (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Don't worry, your just a ray of hope called the children of the light...

Light and love, Jo

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on June 16, 2002

Ahh but Lori I love this one too... {{{{{ hugs }}}}} I think you can't go wrong if you write from the heart, no matter what it is your writing about... And it is always good to expand our horizons and try other things. You really did a great job here with this one hun.

Love and Light
dreamweaver