My Earliest Memory (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kerrie Riggs (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

I could feel your pain in this poem. It is so real. Thanks for writing.
Kerrie

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

Reviewed by Nichole

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

I know how this still hurts you. Your strength in sharing here is wonderful.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Lori I weep for you loss and my misplaced hatred for my Mother. I could not understand her Alcoholism. She died abandoned by me. Now too late the tears fall
and there is no way to accept forgiveness for what I did to her. I cry for and for me
for different reasons. God bless you and same me. P.S. And now too late I cry for Momma. Bill

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

Lori.. you have made me weep. I lost my mom young too.. your poem truly moved me. Your talent is beyond question. katy

Reviewed by Deirdre Barringer (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2002

to lose your mother at such a young age must have been so hard-but this is a lovely tribute.

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

My Mom & Dad are still living and I appreciate them a great deal. I have a great imagination but I cannot even come close to knowing what that feels like for you and others. I stop myself from trying to imagine it and dismiss it from my mind each time. It is strange how even pain has different colors just like love does.
Amor

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

Great tribute

Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

Really touching...beautiful write Lori.

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

This touched my heart, too...
Very moving, beautiful write...

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

peace to you
josie

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

Hi Lori,
This was so sad...
I am sorry for your pain....
Beautiful tribute to
your mothers memory...

Hugs,
Trixie

Reviewed by Ed Lupinacci (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

Lori i feel for the little girl who had to experience this. it is never easy. but when it happens to a child it is harder. I remember the last words from my father before he died. I was a kid and was asking my mother if i could go fishing. He yelled from the bedroom. Let the bastard go and i hope he drowns. when i got home i found out he was rushed to the hospital and died.
it was my last memory of him.

Reviewed by Scada (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

I'm sorry for your loss. My mother and I don't always see eye to eye, but I can't imagine my life without her.

Scada

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on July 18, 2002

Lori, I cannot imagine how hard it would be but you have imparted some of that pain here. I'm sure that your mother would (or is) proud of you for how wonderful you have become.
J.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Lori, please accept a hug from me, too.

(((((Lori)))))
Gina

Reviewed by Steve Reichard (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Beautifully written tribute to your mother.

Reviewed by Tiana (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Lori, this is such a touching write. Sending you ((((hugs))))

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Expressed with true passion, your means to share so others may heal is a divine light for all to see.

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

{{{{{{{{{{ Lori }}}}}}}}}}
Just wanted to come by and give you a hug.. Just cuz.. And to remind you that I care.

Love and Light
Melanie

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

My Mom is still living, but lost my Dad at age 21. A heartfelt write Lori. {{{{{Hugs}}}}}

Reviewed by EMILY (Reader)

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

What a beautiful write in tribute to your mother (((hugs)))....

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Lori, this was so moving, and touched my heart. Beautifully written

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on July 17, 2002

Awwww, Hun. What a beautiful, moving tribute to your mother. (((HUGS))) to you...my mother died 12 years ago, I was 31. It was hard then...but so it must be more so for you, dear Lori. The last sentance brought me to tears..."...that others may never know the pain of being alone in a crowd of familiar faces crying for their mother." (((HUGS))) and much love, Karla.

Reviewed by T Cloth (Reader)

Reviewed on March 20, 2002

Such a sad and touching work; a glimpse at your earliest memory is probably a glimpse at your tender soul as well...