Je Parle Trop ll (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Nicole Lasher

Reviewed on August 10, 2002

You speak, so actually, you speak of survival ;)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

A lot of pain in these words and well expressed. I cannot think of any healing words just .......HUGS!

Reviewed by Muhammad Ali Panhwar (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2002

Quite Feminist but Nice!

Reviewed by Fritz Barnes

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Ouch, that was like a sucker-punch...here's hoping that Nichole is finding healing and happiness. Very effective writing, as always, Lori.

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Damn Lori,

I do believe that this is one of my favorites. Superb my friend. It is stark, gritty and holds nothing back. I like that. Thank you for your support on Alan Phillips, Caldwell Phillips (our joint page) and my page. We apprecite you sweetness.

Love, Janet

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

7-21-02

Excellent... Thanks for yopur comments!

TRASK

Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Lori;

Keep writing hun. You are truly a telented young woman. Know I am always here if you need to talk. And that I am so proud of you.

Namaste'
Melanie

Reviewed by Nichole

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Merci mon bon ami!

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

well said. well read
me

Reviewed by Inam Khaskheli (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

i speak that u r right now on ur way....

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Love the French language even if I dont understand. You speak through your writings, and I for one, don't think it's too much. Great write Lori

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

It's better to talk about some things
instead of pushing them deeper and deeper--healing partly comes from revealing...
You write beautifully about everything...

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

You've known rape....but you must forget...therein lies the hope which is not fantasy.

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

I think there is more for you out there than the sum of your experience. Cast away the past look only to the promise of NOW

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

well spoken...this is great!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

very well done...

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Excellent expression in any language.
Amor

Reviewed by Kay P Devenish

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

you are ssssooooo cleaver ,I have a hard enough time just with english,I really admire anyone who can speak or write in more than one language.Very good work LORI.
FROM
KAY

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on July 21, 2002

Te habla de amor porque es mi sueno
Te habla de miedo porque es mi realidad
Te habla de rapar porque es me experiencia
Te habla de esperanza porque todo hay que tener una fantasia
Te habla de perder porque es todo que haber sabido
Te hable de matar me
Pienso que hablo demasiado

Been a long time since I have written
forgive me my mistakes but I thought that
it might be a nice gesture to try.
P.S. I don't know where my Spanish Dictionary is!
Bill
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