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When the Stage Extends
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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Who weeps for the rose once the thorn has won-

After inspired explosions of color, brown and

no longer hold the eye’s affection?

 

Who cries for the actor after the scene-

When the stage extends beyond the curtain, and

the makeup fails, and

the rehearsed lines of life hold no meaning -

When the only words in the mind of misplaced creation

 are repeated rhyming esoteric clichés?

 

The poet celebrates both rose and thorn, and

actor and misplaced words-

Every breath a poem in waiting -

An embryo dependent upon soul and pen.

 


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 Reviews of "When the Stage Extends"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 17, 2009
...A REFLECTION OF AN ARTIST'S HEART... WELL WRITTEN WITH WONDERFUL PHRASES AND IMAGERY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on June 28, 2009
Great stuff!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 26, 2009
This is deep and meaningful poetry, Lori. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed on June 26, 2009
William Shakespeare similar quote, "the world is a stage and we're merely actors upon it," we're all in the same boat, real actors fail in real life, they can't even act right, drugs alcohol etc, the true actors who don't know it, think they're watching the real actors, when in essence, that death scene acted out comes to bite in real life, cheers

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)
Reviewed on June 25, 2009
Beautifully written! Holly

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on June 24, 2009
outstanding and well compsed
Most enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Nature is harsh on defects in perfection and nips them in the bud. Poets gather up the shattered pieces and elevate them to hallowed stature.

So good to see you again, Lori.

Ron

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
Lori, it is so good to see you...and read you again

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 22, 2009
The imagery in this is wonderful...you have written this so well.

Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Powerfully thought provoking lines here, Lori - undone -

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Lori,
Wonderfully evocative through its well-chosen imagery and superior expression, this is very fine indeed.
John

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Wow.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
Beautiful! Poets once again immortalized! Yeah!! Power to the pen!
Loveed it Lori.

Anna

Reviewed by Bennett Kremen
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
I'm glad I've discovered your work. I'll be looking for more

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
This is nothing less than a perfect diamond, Lori. You have carefully cut each facet bringing clarity and light to the soul and purpose of the poet. You aced this, as you do all of your offerings. I am honored to read you, again.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
I like this one, it embodies well the poet's heart and soul. Very nicely done Lori,
hugs
fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 20, 2009
An exceptional write indeed, my friend. Well done.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Exceptional, Lori! You captured the soul and heart of the poet,while
stirring our spirits! Kudo's 1...ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
How beautifully you take command and unfold a story...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Your poetic convictions move my spirit
Blessings ...

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
a poet is a neutral observer whose perspective is filtered through a veil of emotion, as well as evaluation, and extends his/her verse through a stage of performing words ...

"An embryo dependent upon soul and pen." ... great line, Lori ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
The Poet Celebrates With Her(His) POETIC JUSTICE!!

Thank You Your Kind Comments...

TRASK...

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 19, 2009
Lori, who sings for the poet? You do, beautifully,
in the execution of this poem. -gene.


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