William Shakespeare similar quote, "the world is a stage and we're merely actors upon it," we're all in the same boat, real actors fail in real life, they can't even act right, drugs alcohol etc, the true actors who don't know it, think they're watching the real actors, when in essence, that death scene acted out comes to bite in real life, cheers
This is nothing less than a perfect diamond, Lori. You have carefully cut each facet bringing clarity and light to the soul and purpose of the poet. You aced this, as you do all of your offerings. I am honored to read you, again.
Take care,
Sherry
a poet is a neutral observer whose perspective is filtered through a veil of emotion, as well as evaluation, and extends his/her verse through a stage of performing words ...
"An embryo dependent upon soul and pen." ... great line, Lori ...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Regis
Most enjoyable write
Love & peace be with you
William
So good to see you again, Lori.
Ron
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Wonderfully evocative through its well-chosen imagery and superior expression, this is very fine indeed.
John
Loveed it Lori.
Anna
Take care,
Sherry
hugs
fee
stirring our spirits! Kudo's 1...ET
Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings ...
"An embryo dependent upon soul and pen." ... great line, Lori ...
Thank You Your Kind Comments...
TRASK...
in the execution of this poem. -gene.