very interesting verse to ponder my dear, this one got me, "summers end, no tan lines on the moon" this sounded sexual to me, I guess if you want tan lines on the moon you have to lie face down in the sun with the moon uncovered, hehe cheers
I like the monarch butterfly between the roses. Very beautiful indeed. You can actually mix and match with these and come up with all manner of cool stuff. "a broken marriage, mothers watch, between the roses. "wrapped up in his work, a careless spider, on the moon (needs driving lessons!)", "fasting for change, a yard sale, now my own (sell everything and buy it back again, why not??:-). Be good.
All excellent with a splash of dry humor. I am not sure if I have a favorite but if I do its between the first and last. Perfection as always.
Take care,
Sherry
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Blessing on Your Day,
Marcia
"daybreak" and "wrapped up in his work." -gene.
Ron
Blessings and Love - Micke
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
All delicate and with poignant aftertaste...'daybreak' and 'yard sale' in particular. Excellent!
John
out of your ku! You amaze me!
TRASK
Be always safe,
Karen
Christine
Had to chuckle at the one about the moon. LOL! The visual that popped into my head - um. Yeah. LOL
As EdK said, all very good - and that last one breaks the heart with its sadness and truth. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hugs,
Anna
hugs
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Take care,
Sherry