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5 Ru and Ku
by Lori L Moore → (All Poetry by Lori L Moore)
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climbing the shadow

of Mount Fuji-

why applaud

 

a parrot

mocking a canary-

karaoke

 

he calls it dancing-

two left feet

upon my own

 

the tan line

on his finger-

beware of dogs

 

raindrops ripple

then disappear-

excuses

 


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 Reviews of "5 Ru and Ku"
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on September 9, 2009
I am such a big fan of your ku's...these are brilliant!!! You are so very talented, my friend. Keep 'em coming!!

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 3, 2009
I do not ru the way you stir the ru. Only you can make a parrot hilarious.

Ron

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Liked them all but I like #4 the best. But you shouldn't defame dogs, they have some integrity, well except Mr Weter who barfed all over the living room last night. Patrick

Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
I once took a ball-room dance class about 10 years ago. I was about as graceful as a plane crash. Your two left feet stanza speaks volumes to me in a PTSD sort of way:-) Nice work Lori.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
These are conceptualized well.
The first strikes me as a painting
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 29, 2009
Meaningful haiku, Lori. I love them all. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Jerry Diamond (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2009
I like the way you mix up your words in a a meaningful medley
You take me there !
This is cool * he calls it dancing-

two left feet

upon my own* Ha Ha

Jerry

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 28, 2009
great line up, but paticularly the parrot and the dancing do it for me! Very strong images conjured in each of them, though. xx

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on August 28, 2009
...DAYDREAMS, NATURE, REALITY....TAKING QUICK PICTURES OF LIFE LIKE YOU DO SO NICELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
Lori, your talent is inexhaustible. I can't decide on a favorite;
I like them all. Thanks. -gene.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
..my favorite it the last one..they are all great,,,you sure have a nac for this :)

Reviewed on August 27, 2009
Exquisite, Lori - the first one a showstopper - deeply thought provoking - and had to laugh at the parroting parrot. =] Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
love all of these and would be hard pressed to pick a fav...

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
I must agree with others, the parrot-canary, is my favorite.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
Your Ku are always excellent and always entertaining. I loved the parrot and canary, how clever you are, Lori.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on August 27, 2009
Lori,
You've done it again! This time I have a favourite, the parrot and the canary...so clever and funny.

John

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
Well done, Lori.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
with few words You get a myriad pf meaning into your Ku&ru Lori!
Unique and clever!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 26, 2009
Humanity Is Made Up Of EXCUSES,i.e.Includes My Intellectual Lair Son!

Lori You Have Unique Twist Of Words Most Can't Comprehend!

TRASK

Reviewed on August 26, 2009
Love them all, deep with their own meaning. I especially like the lst one.


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