Freedom has its price. Great thought provoking write. Thanks for your many comments on my poetry. I love them.
Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2003
Obviously, an omen of good things to come.
You have such talent!
Reviewed by Dens Dreamweaver (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2002
excellent questions.. It has always amazed me the things people will do in Gods name. His heart must break a million times over. And still, 'tis the innocent who suffer.
Lori, for your first poem it is so well written. You have some wonderful talent. J.
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2002
Great poem, Lori. Our first poems are usually very telling. I think I wrote my very first poem when I was about 12. It was written in Russian and was about space travel.
South Baltimore serves as the backdrop for this gripping story of three brothers leading very different lives but joined forever by the secrets of a painful family past.
Married ten years, and more in love than ever, Robert and Marcie have everything to live for. But a terrible secret is breaking Robert's heart: he knows that Marcie is about to die...
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Wonderful Lori
Peter Paton
You have such talent!
the answer is...for god and country.
but your poem was in "me" even as i was.
very good!!!!!
Take Care
Dale
:) Debbie
(my sentiments exactly)