A Fool's Dance (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dennis Byrne (Reader)

Reviewed on October 14, 2003

Wow! Yet another great one.

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Don’t me tell I’m pretty
don’t feed me your lies
I’m tired of pretension
and vain alibis
a fool can dance
when love is free
but you’ll never again be dancing with me...
This is a gem...enjoyed it...
sigh....such is life.....
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

This too is a great poem which impressed me

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on December 30, 2002

Good for you Lori...Nice expressions

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on December 27, 2002

true...an nothin is better...

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on December 25, 2002

Very nice, Lori. Merry Christmas.

Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)

Reviewed on December 24, 2002

I say you have one last dance.... the can-can, as you kick his sorry self out that door.. ;) Merry Christmas Lori. :)
~Kari~

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on December 24, 2002

You don't need that kind of fool in your life. Wonderful write.

Reviewed by William DeVault

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Let's face it, while not holding sole ownership of the vice, many men can be great jerks...I apologize for the transgressions of my gender! Nicely written!

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Good Write ...

Merry Christmas
~Sanil

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Another commitmentphobiac huh? I really liked you use of words and the quick, dance like tempo.

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Lori Lynn from Texas! How you been? Amen! No
more dances for him. Just kick him in the ass and off the floor. Quicken his pace out the door. Merry Christmas darling and a very Happy New Year. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Lori, Well if this isn't one of the truest things I've ever read. Really liked this,,Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

Okay I will not lie; This was good.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on December 23, 2002

THIS ROCKS!! Happy Holidays, Lori.

Reviewed by Tova Gabrielle

Reviewed on December 22, 2002

I like the ending, yup. And we are in sinc, I see.
liked the contrast between proffessing love and pace-quickening, in fact, liked it so much, think I'll try writing one myself about that very phenomena. thanks, you inspired writing, the true test of a good author.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on December 22, 2002

Nobody says it better;-) Happy Holidays to you Lori...

Reviewed by Janet Caldwell

Reviewed on December 22, 2002

God! I am so sick of it too, LOL, well not the pretty part but the assholes who tell me one thing and do another. Grrrr. OK, enough of that sweetie.

Merry Holidaze!
Love, Janet xoxoxoxo

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on December 22, 2002

You go girl.