The Cry of the Broken Child (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Kerrie Riggs (Reader)

Reviewed on May 30, 2004

So powerful and so true. I grieve with the broken, unseen, unknown child. This send chills down me as I read it. Thanks so much.
Kerrie

Reviewed by Poetry Deborah

Reviewed on January 31, 2004

This is so heartfelt...beautifully done. I was so very moved by this piece.

Deborah

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Poor child I feel for any child or human in a bad situation this is a rising write

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on January 31, 2003

Beautiful Write Lori! Keep up the great work!
Jill

Reviewed by coni lea harris (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2003

ahhhhh, this was so sad, reminds me of my childhood,

Reviewed by Alain Gracio

Reviewed on January 8, 2003

Fascinating. Endearing
Cheers
Allain

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand

Reviewed on January 7, 2003

I think alot of us are the brocken child...
Great write!
Blue eyed fish...

Reviewed by Gilles Marchand

Reviewed on January 7, 2003

Touching and powerful

Reviewed by Drkman (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2003

Lori,
This is a wonderfully eye opening write. Powerful images here.
Drkman

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

Very strong.. really hit home hard.. wow...

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

You've given a voice to those who have none. And done it beautifully.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

I can feel your pain.....living it mysel

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2003

Wow, Lori this is so painful. Wish the children need not face such situations, ever, anywhere in the world.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

awe-ing! very good relate...

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

Talent...you've got it in spades, girl.
Brilliant piece.
-James

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

An excellent write Lori!!!!! Happy New Year!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Deborah Carter

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

It cut right through me. So emotional. Bill has told me you are an excellent poet, and I agree. Deb

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2003

Pierces straight to the heart...
Powerful write, powerfully felt...

Reviewed by Tien Avielle (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2003

oh my - such an accurate description, I know from real life ... well done.

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on January 4, 2003

very good written

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2003

Ahhh, but the future is ours, only by releasing the past.
~E

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 4, 2003

Hi Lori,
Outstanding piece...

Happy New Year
Trixie

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on January 4, 2003

wonderful write(:

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Lori,
I wish I could rate this, but there really wouldn't be a rating high enough, because this is so filled with strong emotion. You did an excellent job, of giving a voice to this piece!

Hugs,
Maria

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Oh, wow, how wrenching to soul and heart, Lori, how wrenching to the little girl, excellent write.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Heart wrenching a so very well written.

Reviewed by Madame X (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Lori, powerful write. This came across jumping from the page.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

This jumps off the page grabs your ribcage...such a painful subject so powerfully treated with sensitivity ...well done Lori!

Reviewed by Dennis Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Excellent write!
Dennis

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Perfect placing of words for the emotional impact of such sadness. Excellent write.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

1-03-03

Most Excellent!

TRASK

Reviewed by Morchuis

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Hi Lori, written as only you know how.

Hi "Happy New Year" we must be due a smile by now,I would tell you a joke but they only bring tears to yours eyes.
Remember my lovely girl it's 2003,---
May it be such a very happy year,
To them,and you,and of course plus me,
So all the very best to you my dear.
Morchuis

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Excellent, Lori. Give that broken child a big hug from me. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Very touching Lori, gave me the chills. Floria

Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Good Write .... Excellent....

Thanks for this write Lorie
~Sanil

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

"...mother and daddy drew blood again/with practiced daggers from the tongue." this really got to me, especially this part...words do cause wounds...vivid description of such a sad subject...excellent write, lori! continue to be a voice...this needs to be shouted from the rooftops! *STANDING OVATION* ((((HUGS)))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

Lori, this is some outstanding writing on such a sad subject

Reviewed by Brittany Ren�e

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

That really shook me, Lori. The best and most brilliant write I've ever read in quite a while. This will most definately stay with me for quite some time, as time goes by, sometimes I feel like that child. Bless you for this wonderful insight, the most precious words, and the beautiful threads of love and hope. Brilliant writing.

Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on January 3, 2003

A fine example of excellence throughout. What a beautiful job you did on this write, Lori. Good to see you again and I hope you will have the greatest year of them all.
Amor