Two Tanka - Three Haiku (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on February 5, 2004

Tanka and haiku/senryu work well together, and you have done very well here, Lori.

Reviewed on January 27, 2003

I can never get my head round Japanese forms when written in Elglish, a verbose language. You have written these cwell and with discipline but as usual I found myself wishing the ideas had been explored further.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 26, 2003

Beautiful writes.. I enjoyed this very much..
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Julie Gaskins (Reader)

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Lori,

Very well done!!

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

very good

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie

Reviewed on January 22, 2003

Beautiful writes.. I enjoyed these much!

Reviewed by fare good (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

This is so beautiful it goes with the beauty of your heart and thank you for your beautiful words.

Reviewed by donovanlwhitworth

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

I like your poetry I like thim

Reviewed by Sandee Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on January 21, 2003

Lori!
Great work.Thanks for the explanation.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Lori,
these are so beautiful
"death shadows my heart
realities perfection
love is rarely true"
rich in meaning.
peggy

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Broken heart reveals
lover's falsehoods uncovered
as spirit heals self.

:) Or something like that!! I, too, love the "whole" of the seperates, Lori! Nicely done!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Thank you Lori for explaining this. I enjoyed the poetry. bill murray

Reviewed by Trixie Love

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

I really enjoyed this
piece Lori...
Thanks for the lesson.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

very penetrating word usage...Lovely as always, Lori;-)

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

the pains of the heart are played upon the soul.....never be afraid,you'll see.
these are very good writes of the emotion tho.

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

These are lovely Lori. I especially love the first one

Reviewed by michael horetsky (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Wow am havin bad love times.. I really likethis poem.. Why so hard to have trust returned.. You let your guard down an trust then wam... In hte face.. Thanks!!!

Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Very good!
I personally love
Tanka and Haiku.
Faye

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

like most haku, and tanka these vilolate at least 96 of the 102 known rules of the genra -- (half of which contradict the other half!) my point, the rules be damned!

taken ivdividually these are fine -- taken as a piece they are very good indeed

well done

john+

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

"resurrect my heart
with visions of tomorrow
yesterday�s fool has perished"

Great lines, Lori. The fool has perished with the resurrection of greater love. Love, Alex

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

Ahso.

Reviewed by Dee C.

Reviewed on January 20, 2003

I really enjoyed reading these...
Thank you for the lesson...I've been very curious about both styles and you have explained it very well!