Between the Pages (poem) by Lori L Moore on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dove (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

Beautiful sorrow done wonderful..

Dove ~

Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick

Reviewed on May 6, 2003

It leaves me with strong feelings.

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on April 15, 2003

This so well done. Haven't heard from you in a while--I look forwar to reading more of your poetry. J.

Reviewed by Russ Okamura (Reader)

Reviewed on March 29, 2003

Passion fills your heart with this soulful expression!

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on March 21, 2003

Last verse has a great hook but over all the whole poem was superb !

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 4, 2003

This was so lovely and so heart-wrenching..just love this poem, Your talent here is amazing..love it,

Reindeer

Reviewed by John Hutchinson

Reviewed on March 2, 2003

Sometimes pain hollows out the crucible of our very souls-but then cannot a deeper one hold that much more joy when it does come?

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

"it dwells in the graveyard of lost romance
an eternal victim to the suicide of broken dreams
pressed between the pages of soft reflection"
excellent lines embodied ina very powerfuk poem...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 1, 2003

So many broken dreams in this world! Don't stop dreaming because of that.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

heartbreaking...I love you for loving me
but my heart will never be yours....I know this all too well
Love
Tinka

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on February 28, 2003

To re-write my favorite lines I'd have to write out the entire poem. Excellent work, Lori!

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Powerful piece, the verses " allowing yesterday to live forever and forever to touch today. " Really jumped out at me for some reason. Keep up the great writing, and may God Bless you!
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

sad yet sweet piece..

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

This was wonderful...the whole thing flowed so smoothly and the ending lines were excellent!

Reviewed by Mary Quire

Reviewed on February 22, 2003

Beautifully written, yet, so very sad. I enjoyed it much.

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

beautiful, sadly beautiful...oh, those broken dreams and the power they hold...Lori, you've captured so well, the imagery and quietly sad ache and this is so felt,
thank you...ah, sigh, just got me, you know?
michele

Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Such poignant beauty in these images of devastating sadness. Superb stuff.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

how sad... heartbreaking. *sniff*

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Drink more fluids. Very nice.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Lori as only you can say it...last stanza superb and perfect!Doesn't get much better than this...

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

great write!!

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Lori,
sigh this is beautiful romance
Peg

Reviewed by Morchuis

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Hi Lori,
A very sad poem, even sadder is the thought that it should take such sadness, to create such beautiful poetry.----Morchuis

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

You will find that man, or he will
find you and treat you like the wonderful
woman you are.
Sad, but a hell of a poem..

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

This is a beautiful write with excellent lines. Many blessings to you on your road to healing.
Amor

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Lovely poem. Glad I stopped by.
~E

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

An outstanding poem Lori..it touched me.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

excelent. loved the last line.-steve

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Broken souls can be fixed, it just takes patience from those who love them. :-) Good write.

Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

This is very nicely done, Lori.
-from one broken soul to another...
-James

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

Such sweet honesty. Very nice poem Lori

Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

This is beautiful and sad, Lori. I must go to Bombay immediately and get you some of that Mumbai gin to remedy the situation. :) Love, Alex

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

heartbreaking...soul shattering confession...**Mari**

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on February 21, 2003

"it dwells in the graveyard of lost romance
an eternal victim to the suicide of broken dreams
pressed between the pages of soft reflection"

remarkable lines Lori.... Floria