Puisque tu parles français tu comprendras ce que je veux dire quand je dis que ce que tu as écrit est merveilleux et touche le fond de l'âme. Beautiful poetry. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace, Regis.
Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 23, 2003
Oh don't say that "forgotten"... Good write!
Reviewed by Dennis Byrne (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2003
Verey well written. Jaw droping. I don't think you can be forgotten by anyone who reads this. Impressive.
Lori...so very gentle, so very sorrowful...a joy to read.
Reviewed by Glenna Cancilla (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Lori,
This is the first time I have read one of your writes. This is beautiful yet sad. Mayn of people die and are forgotten. I have a feeling that you could never be one of those people. Excellent write and thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
God Bless.
Glenna
What to say that hasn't been said;-)You know I think you are a premier poet,and this work certainly proves that.However,you are also one whose comments and ideas are always looked forward to for their wisdom
and sincerity of heart and soul!
Lori, you have been missed!
Reviewed by Anthony Wolfe (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Such beautiful, inspired poetry. Technique and imagination blend to give this work a life of its own.
Lori, I remember you from way back and my thoughts have often strayed to the part of me that remembers and misses a talent I thought I may never again encounter. Enough of reminiscing: on with the comments about this poem. It is a graphic and emotively toned example of why free verse is NOT "cut-up" prose. The imagery and choice of words are very powerful and the thought and feeling they generate are palpable and memorable.
I'm so happy to catch up with you again and look forward to reading more of your inspired poetry as often as time will permit.
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Oh Lori, This is so powerful and beautiful ... it touches the soul deeply. Such strikingly memorable words written from the heart of one who will always be remembered.
Beautiful poem, Lori. I'll always remember you, sweetheart. This reminds me of my favorite sonnet by Christina Rossetti (1830-1894):
REMEMBER me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.
--Christina Rossetti
http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/poem-qr.html
Reviewed by Jeremy de Laroche (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Lori!
Beautiful, absolutely! and totally funkadelic!!
I do not think mortal words could explain the sorrow i feel from this poem.
Excellent!
Just as the ANZACS are remembered, i am sure that it would be a tragedy if people forgot them, as it would if we ever forgot you!
Reviewed by Cherokee Sage (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
I'll remember this poem, pretty lady. It's a good one.
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2003
Beautifully done, Lori. Each line a gem.
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2003
Lori, you will not die forgotten, and I will remember you. I will remember your words and ideas you shared with me. And I will place them in a corner of my soul and carry them with me forever. I will remember you. Please remember me too. Bill
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This is the first time I have read one of your writes. This is beautiful yet sad. Mayn of people die and are forgotten. I have a feeling that you could never be one of those people. Excellent write and thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work.
God Bless.
Glenna
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and sincerity of heart and soul!
Lori, you have been missed!
I'm so happy to catch up with you again and look forward to reading more of your inspired poetry as often as time will permit.
~Joseph
Chrissie
No one can forget you. You are a beautiful and wonderful person; and your words speaks for many. Wonderful poem well-expressed.
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
It's so nice to see you back here at AD, -haven't seen you in such a loooooong time.
-James
REMEMBER me when I am gone away,
Gone far away into the silent land;
When you can no more hold me by the hand,
Nor I half turn to go yet turning stay.
Remember me when no more day by day
You tell me of our future that you plann'd:
Only remember me; you understand
It will be late to counsel then or pray.
Yet if you should forget me for a while
And afterwards remember, do not grieve:
For if the darkness and corruption leave
A vestige of the thoughts that once I had,
Better by far you should forget and smile
Than that you should remember and be sad.
--Christina Rossetti
http://www.theotherpages.org/poems/poem-qr.html
Beautiful, absolutely! and totally funkadelic!!
I do not think mortal words could explain the sorrow i feel from this poem.
Excellent!
Just as the ANZACS are remembered, i am sure that it would be a tragedy if people forgot them, as it would if we ever forgot you!