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Dr. Bonnie Losing Battle
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oh the agony of it all............


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Dr. Bonnie Losing Battle
 
I’m losing my battle from this affliction that has infected me.
It’s not like me to give up, it’s certainly not as I used to be.
But this affliction tore me down and ripped apart my heart.
So now I’m afraid my friends, that Dr. Bonnie will soon depart.
 
You can’t visualize this affliction, but it’s there just the same.
No one yet is telling me of all the symptoms or its name.
But I’m a doctor so I just dug deep inside my own brain,
That’s when I found the answers and found out its name.
 
The symptoms are the wild laughter, a little pain and lots of sleep.
You often get nauseated and the food in the tummy is hard to keep.
Sometimes it even gives you a headache and you need to take your bed.
So now you know what this affliction is, that’s right, it’s our own ED.
 
Written by,
Dr. Bonnie
 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Dr. Bonnie Losing Battle"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
You surely did cure Ed by now. He is well on the way to his mending I hope. He has a job now, part time, but at least he is working. Pray for him always though, he surely does need our prayers.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
Cute poetic illness

Reviewed by Darryn Murphy
Reviewed on September 26, 2008
cute, good read

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
Cute, fun write!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
lol. Liz

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
We All Suffer From Some Kinda Affliction,i.e.Idea Is To Overcome And Just Keep On Trucken On...Doctor Self or Doctor Who We're All Gonna Die Anyways...

I Just Hope Before I Do I've Accomplished What I Set Out To Do...

Kool Write On...

TRASK

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
Cute Bonnie, just love the humor and good naturedness, very creative piece....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 25, 2008
As a doctor in my own "write" I might say that you just might have either Karenalaria or Karlabetes as their symptoms are basically the same...just keep doin' what you're doin' & take two bottles of aspirin and call me in the morning...not too early though, we both need our sleep...Ed

Reviewed on September 25, 2008
Oh, this is too funny! Sorry to laugh at your "affliction", but at least you don't have Karenalaria (ten times worse than malaria)!! LOL That's the worst; once you have that, you might as well start plannin' your funeral! It's fatal! LOLOLOLOL

Adorable write; well done, Bonnie! *hack, cough, hack, wheeze, gassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssp* *Ooohhh, me heart!!* LOLOL

(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sickie) Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :P

Reviewed on September 25, 2008
LOL! Have a raging case of Ed-itis, eh? Once it gets in there, sorry to say, it's IN there. Forever. Oh, well, could be worse: could have Karlabetes! LOL Excellent write to end my evening with, on a giggling fit! Well done, Dr.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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