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How Rude
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What a day I had!


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How Rude
 
Yesterday while shopping a woman butted in line, how rude.
But when she cut in front of another person an argument ensued.
While pulling out, a car parked behind me wanting my parking spot.
There were plenty of other empty places in this huge parking lot.
 
So we both sat there for awhile as if I could somehow disappear.
A car in front, couldn’t go forward or backward for he was at my rear.
How rude people get when they have to wait, there is not a reason to be.
If they would just be a little more patient they would find serenity.
 
As I was pulling away from a green light a car cut in front of me.
By now, I couldn’t wait to get home for some peace and sanity.
Have people changed drastically, so much so that we lost our civility?
When did we treat people like chattel, like today seemed to be?
 
That woman who butted in line could have easily been more kind.
If she would have just asked me, I would have let her in my line.
And that man that pulled behind me waiting for my parking space.
He could have had it gladly, but he had to move for it to take place.
 
As for the car that cut me off and caused me to go in the ditch.
If I’d use swear words , I would have called her a nasty witch.
 
Written by,
Bonnie May
 

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Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Bonnie, unfortunately, courtesy seems to be a word that does not exist in the lexicons of many people today -- I don't know what created the change -- but civility is out the window with most of the younger generation, and more than I care to admit, in my generation too -- peace to you -- JMW

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 17, 2008
The sister of doc Bonnie?

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Another humour while driving write, sure beats road rage and somone getting hurt though. LOve it.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Bonnie, it looks like rude is the coin of the realm these days. -gene.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Hi Bonnie,unfortunately we live in a very narcisstic society.I agree with Linda Law when she said that people are in a hurry because life is a hurry.That is a sad reality.Several weeks ago,I was talking to this woman while she waited for the light to turn green and she said to me that people are always in a rush.When people cross the street and when a car hits them,they don't even have the courteous to stop their cars and to see if they are alright.They are just so focus on themselves and want to be in a rush for everything that they don't have the heart to care for a person's well being.We live in the "Me" generation which stands for Must Escape which is why people are in a rush.

The thing that I absolutely hate about people is when they are rude and not even know it whether its cutting in front of a line,stealing a parking space,not being grateful when someone greets you right back,etc.I swear some people can be down right cold-hearted,but thank goodness there are still good people in this world that showcases civility.Take good care of yourself

Love and Hugs
Edwin

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
You think thats bad, you ought to drive for a living...e

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
There is such a thing as "rude"....and unfortunately, life is getting more and more that way...people in a hurry because life is a hurry... and it isn't until we reach this age when we begin to realize that....our lives went so fast because we rushed thru it...and now...well, now hopefully, we are more patient...more understanding....at least I hope alot of us are... I will admit however to being aggravated many times myself while waiting in line and having people shove in front...while I'm in a hurry too... or in traffic when they pass you then slow down in front of you...??? go figure... it's just something inside of people...and I don't exactly call it "rude"... just misplaced anger.... good description of your pretty rattled day...hehe.... glad you got home ok... lindalaw

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Have people changed drastically, so much so that we lost our civility?
When did we treat people like chattel, like today seemed to be?

So many horrendous problems today, and a loss of civility in our so called 'civilized' society is truly one of them. I now try to avoid these unruly people as often as I can; I even sneak out to the grocer's late at night, when it's only me and the checkout clerk instead of the pushing, nasty, in a hurry crowd.

Reviewed on October 16, 2008
Sad how we've become; God help us!!

I am not one who tolerates rudeness. If they treat me rude, I can be rude, right back. And those who speak Spanish in front of me...Oooh, you DON'T want to get ME started on THAT!! That's the WORST!!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(


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