I’m Going On a Treasure Hunt (poem) by Bonnie Lou May on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 13, 2009

You always put a smile on a person's face with your sense of humor.Its always a pleasure and a honor reading your poetry.You've mean more to the Den than you can ever imagine.You are a treasure that no one can measure :-),take care

Edwin

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on January 12, 2009

look no further for the treasure Bonnie -- we in the den have found it-- you -- may peace and love,and joy be always with you -- JMW

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on January 11, 2009

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on January 11, 2009

Tell hubby to give back that funny bone!

Georg

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Oh damn, I hope Carol is wrong, as Rufuz buried something in the yard just this afternoon...maybe i will dig it up, I can always use a spare funny bone...Ed

Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Bonnie,
I think I saw Rufuz chewing on it. Maybe ED stole it when ya wasn't lookin!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Delightful poem tinged with whimsy! You are a treasure whatevr you write, but you do have a gift, Bonnie for making us laugh!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Funny thing, Bonnie, the one good thing you'll never lose
is You. Sometimes a smile is a good as a laugh. -gene.

Reviewed by Marcia Miller-Twiford

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I agree with Fee's comment below about this one Bonnie. Don't worry. I've never read a poem of yours that wasn't a keeper. You're a true poet so let come what may and listen to your muse/inner voice.
Hugs,
Marcia

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

This is so great beautiful friend

Reviewed by Linda Law

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Our mind and body have their own direction.... often, we are going thru a "seasonal" change or perhaps just "resting" and then....watch out! Your humor touches so many lives, as does your serious and thought provoking pieces... I believe that HE leads us to what we must be doing at any particular time in life...so... stop hunting for the treasure...because YOU ARE THE TREASURE.... hugs, lindalaw

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I HAVE FAITH IN YOU THAT YOU WILL FIND IT. yOU ALWWAYS HAD A GOOD SENSE OF HUMORE AND COULD CHEER PEOPLE UP QUICKLY. wE ARE GOING TO WAIT FOR A MORE FUNNY WRITE FROM YOU AND THEN WE WILL LOL AND TAKE NO THOUGHT OF OUR CARES. bONNIE, THE MIRACLE HEALER AND A BEAUTIFUL PERSON BESIDES.

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Bonnie~!

You'll find it - keep the faith my dear sweet friend . . . 'cause, you're 'da bomb!!

LOVe and Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I can wait
take your time searching
its right there where you left it
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I'm sure you will find it but in the end you are the real treasure you will find.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Hope you find it; not so funny to lose your funny bone!

(((HUG)S)) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

You're ever in my prayers!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Bonnie,

I hear you. Hope you find it ...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

I believe it is really not very far but I also believe it is not always needed to make others laugh, sometimes we need to share the raindrops as well as the sunshine.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

What a great poem my friend, original and unique..loved it!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2009

Sweetie, I'll bet you will, too!!! Here's a secret (don't tell anyone); you can do like I do. All I have to do is look in the mirror, and that always gives me the giggle I need to get started. Works every time :-)

Ted