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If Its a Hole, Does It Have to be Empty
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He’s gone
And I can’t quite say he left a hole in my life
Its filled with too many things to be a hole
Its full of memories of happier times
Tears both shed and unshed
Words, both said and unsaid
It has pieces of my heart
And a lot of my mind
It has wishes left unfulfilled
And hopes now near dead
It is half full of maybes
And has a whole stack of never will be’s
It is overly filled with regrets
And full to the top with I’m sorry’s
No this is no hole he left in my life
Maybe the hole is in my heart instead

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 Reviews of "If Its a Hole, Does It Have to be Empty"
Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Fantastic love/lost poem Sue!Yes, we all can relate,
but your write it best!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
Sue, poetry doesn't get better than this. Your words are such that most all can relate too, whether they can admit it to themselves or not.
Awesome work!

Lisa

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on August 3, 2004
This is really good stuff here, I am in awe....

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
profoundly symbolic ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Sad and beautifully done!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Wow! Great write. I live the "filled with too many things to be a hole" image. Nice job.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
I like this write......

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Excellent concept and expression -- making negatives into positives.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Sad and sorrowful pen Sue...still we must look forward with courage , for new opportunities and ideals in life .

Peter

Reviewed by Sharon Palmer
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Oh WOW, Sue! I LOVE this! You know, it has an inherent "hook" in it that could be written into a wonderful song! I am envious that I did not think of it myself! Awesome work, beautiful piece!

~Namaste~
Sharon

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Very emotive and reflective, Sue.

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 2, 2004
Since Most Human Beings Have Hole(Empty) In There Heads,What's A Heart Got To Do With a Hole In It!????

Sad Romantic Poem!

TRASK


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