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Take This...
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I can't decide whether to go with prose or rhyme today so I just left it a medley...sorry for the poor structure but this is how it came out...


Take my hand and gently lead me
To the bed we share in passion
Kiss these lips to keep them silent
Of the days long gone problems
Take this body that feels so weary
Awaken it with your touch
Open these eyes to your beauty
Today they have seen too much
Take me hotly with your ardor
Until I forget the days cold chill
If you can forget all our problems
I can promise you I soon will
I’ll go with you to the mountain
Where ecstasy rules the day
Where we can plunge together
Into pools of melting passion
And wash our cares away

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 Reviews of "Take This..."
Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Dear Sue,

Beautiful poetry and so passionate, great write.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
How wonderful when you can leave the world behind. Nice write here. I like the fell of this.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Sue, it matters not that you could make up your mind..You managed still to write a wonderful thought and delight everyone's need to go there with you!

Lisa

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Love and passion..the antidote for all ills...
Peter

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Fantastic write!

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
it is beautiful!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Very nice. No need to be sorry over this one. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 12, 2004
Reads great to me!;-) There's nothing better than love
to lift us out of the mundane!...


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