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Be Very Careful
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I want honesty but not too much
I want tenderness but not too often
I want love, but not the cost
I don’t want to give my life
I just want you to give yours
I want passion but only when I say so
And don’t expect it to be too often
I want to share but not my possessions
But half of yours I’ll gladly take
Remember the joy is in the giving
And I’ll let you give until you’re dry
Because I want love and I’m going to get it
Even if I have to lie and lie
Once I have it I may not keep it
I tend to lose things easily
So watch out for me, I’m in your future
I’m the girl who seems too good to be true
I’ll find you and I’ll make you want me
But in the end, I won’t want you

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 Reviews of "Be Very Careful"
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
Reviewed on September 17, 2004
well put

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 12, 2004
Sound like words that usually a man uses !
Excellent

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Wonderful poetic expression. Great job.

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
Dear Sue,

Some powerful and yet sad and dangerous message. Unfortunately there are some really sick and perverted girls/ladies who find this both amusing and challenging. A great write nonetheless.

Warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
An absolutely stunning teeth-clenching composition, Poet! It’s sad whenever anyone does this to another human being. Powerful message blasted across the page for sure. Thanks for the reminder. Take care.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
It's girls like that, that make it harder for the rest of us that are real.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 23, 2004
A lesson in Caution...Sue...
Peter


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