It was Fantazia and the Grateful Dead
That weekend in Atlanta
Mickey and Jerry blending
Mescaline harmony and childish laughter
(riding that train, high on cocaine)
Marching mops and overflowing buckets
Amid clashing cymbals and Disney’s mind
Running wild through the Atlanta underground
(Casey Jones is ready, watch your speed)
Making love in a yellow Volkswagon
In an alley behind the Regency
Standing against a tree in the woods
Rain and kisses on my upturned face
And twice in your mother’s bathroom
Waiting for the coffee to perk, Folgers
(trouble ahead, trouble behind)
Drugs and youth blending with Jerry,
Mickey and Boones Farm, smoking
What we couldn’t eat or drink
Selling what we didn’t need
To get what we did, your guitar
And my recorder, for a pound
Of Panama Red, thumbing across the states
Searching for tornados and storms
To satisfy our need for thunder
Four days of drugs, sex and rock n roll
Rain and hail pounding unwashed bodies
Cleansing our souls and minds
Of the need for more, collapsing finally
In a rundown Memphis hotel
Sleeping for days, spent and replete
While dreaming of Mickey, Jerry
And the Atlanta underground
(don’t you know that notion
just crossed my mind)
Loved this one too. My heavens what memories this rekindled. I could almost make myself blush, laughing here, because I don't blush easy, but those were the days alright, I will be thinking about them all night, thanks for this one.
Debra
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on September 19, 2004
Did you ever repeat these 4 days?
Sounds like ultimate fun to me!!!
Good one.
awesome poem! love all the detail you've captured here and especially the edgy, running-on-empty, always-wanting-more "need for thunder"... so much i like here, Sue. just excellent... Dawn
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Debra
Sounds like ultimate fun to me!!!
Good one.
Reminiscing vivid write, very well written.
warm hugs
Elga
when notions cross your mind, they CROSS your MIND! and they blew MY mind! an excellent, image filled, multi-sensoral feast :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Superb write with vibrant images!
sueb