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The Vampire's Kiss
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
   Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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He followed her into the dark room
Restless with anticipation
He wanted her
With every breath in his body
He was almost panting
So hot he felt his shirt
Clinging to his back
He had never wanted a woman so much
With so much intensity
He felt that if she touched him
He would explode
Into
Billions of white-hot pieces
She looked so cold
So remote
As she stood there with her head bowed
He skin like white porcelain
Her lips blood red
He felt dizzy
Why did the thought of blood
Suddenly make him feint
Why did he think of blood at all
Why did he now feel so cold
As she turned to him
Wrapping her arms around him
She sank her fangs quickly and painlessly
Into his neck, suckling gently at first
Then hard as she pressed
Her cold body into his
He felt himself stiffen even more
His breath became labored as he strained
To press closer to her
Wanting to possess her, to throw her down
And ram himself into her
He groaned and spasmed
As he gave her the last of his juices
In rapid hot bursts
While she took the last of his blood
In rapid hot spurts
And he died
Before she had even turned away

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 Reviews of "The Vampire's Kiss"
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2004
scary lady of the night!

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2004
Yikes!

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on October 20, 2004
Jaysus!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
excellent vampire erotica!

Reviewed on October 19, 2004
whew-v well written i thought, it held my attention from start to finish without distraction & i was impressed how you got into the psyche of the guy through the cool distancing of the femme vamp fatal terrific contrast actually to demonstrate the vulnerability of the male & how easy it is for the female to dominate saludos robin

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Tsk. Tsk. Tsk. Another one's bitten the dust.
Cruelly kewl, Sue.

Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Spun me around with this one Sue.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Very nice. Hot!

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Well so long as he died with a SMILE on his face, it was all worthwhile! Pretty darn hot Sue!

Reviewed on October 19, 2004
(((sue)))

WOW--stunningly, eerily penned--BRAVA! a vampiress, eh? creative twist on the familiar--WONDERFUL! hot hot hot!

i almost got kissed by a spider--walked into this web and right. there. in. front. of. my. face. HUGE spider eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek i didn't know whether to pass out, run, or what LOL

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Sue wow! This is intense ! A vamp poem of perfection!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Horrifyingly good, Sue!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
This one is really scary and hot. Oh My, you are masterful with this genre, Sue.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Hot horror! Great write.

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Darkly erotic...She needs to be tamed...whats her number?.. :)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
Sue, a thrilling bite of a write! Ah, it is that time of the year now isn't it?
Enjoyed.

Lisa

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on October 19, 2004
What I call coming to a stick end Sue..Lol

Peter


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