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Loving You
by Sue Hess → (All Poetry by Sue Hess)
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I wish I could tell you
Exactly what it meant to have loved you
Waking up next to you
Made the sun shine in the deepest winter
Touching your body brought Christmas
In the heat of July
Sent fireworks coursing thru my body
In the gloom of an October dusk
Loving you brought the joy of childhood
The innocence of adolescence
The intense thrill of complete decadence
To love you was to be totally alive
And now that you are gone
It is the black hole of my existence

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 Reviews of "Loving You"
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
Oh Sue. Let me hold your hand for a little while and give you some comfort. I know this feeling all too well. You want to die, you don't manage to accept. But: We cannot force love. We have to face reality and go on. Forget about him and open up for the world. And wait for the right person to come along.
I send you a hug!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 4, 2004
If this is a non-fiction poem, why not send the person a copy it
Doing so could be helpful to you.

Peace

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
bittersweet
beautifully written
well penned

William .....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
excellent expression of life sucking :)

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
brought tears... excellent, precise descriptions here, Sue.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
This is excellent poetry. I especially like the Christmas/July and the fireworks/October dusk images.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Oh this is so bittersweetly beautiful, Sue.

Reviewed by Wayne Porter
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
what a wonderful expression of what a relationship can be and should be and unfortunately, the raw consequence of losing it.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
So very sad ending, beautifully penned!

Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Ah, deeply powerful and moving Sue, this was so poignant, excellently written,

Reindeer

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
Sue your inimitable touch made this incredible piece
come to life. A superb poem!

Reviewed on November 3, 2004
(((sue)))

abject loneliness pours from your words :( i hope this is fictional

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on November 3, 2004
This so so much.......well done.


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