I wish I could tell you
Exactly what it meant to have loved you
Waking up next to you
Made the sun shine in the deepest winter
Touching your body brought Christmas
In the heat of July
Sent fireworks coursing thru my body
In the gloom of an October dusk
Loving you brought the joy of childhood
The innocence of adolescence
The intense thrill of complete decadence
To love you was to be totally alive
And now that you are gone
It is the black hole of my existence
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Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)
Reviewed on November 19, 2004
Oh Sue. Let me hold your hand for a little while and give you some comfort. I know this feeling all too well. You want to die, you don't manage to accept. But: We cannot force love. We have to face reality and go on. Forget about him and open up for the world. And wait for the right person to come along.
I send you a hug!
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I send you a hug!
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Peace
beautifully written
well penned
William .....Peace & Love
Reindeer
come to life. A superb poem!
abject loneliness pours from your words :( i hope this is fictional
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :(