I took a walk today
Needed to get out of myself
At least for a few minutes
It was a little chilly
I really wished I had grabbed a sweater
But I kept walking
At least it was moving
And moving was a positive thing
Wasn’t it
Anyway, while I was walking
I was also thinking
Something I do too much of at times
But what else can you do when you walk
So I thought
About things I should do
And things I knew I wouldn’t
About the future
And the not so distant past
I thought about love
And hate
And all those emotions in between
And when I could avoid it no longer
I thought about you
Soul-reaching in scope, Sue. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
You sure hit the mark with that final line, girl...
A beauty of a poem full of meaning and how well I
know the feelings expressed therein.
Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
You sound a little like me in some ways Sue. I'm forever going off on walks, totally lost in my own thoughts. Nice write
Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on November 13, 2004
why does love have to hurt. As much as you try and distract your mind, "you" will always be there, waiting to pounce on any weak moment. Its a power struggle between your head and your heart. Trouble is as I said to someone else today, the journey to coming to terms and getting past can be a long one. But your will reach the end. Keep busy, dont spend too much time on your own, be with someone who makes you laugh......all tried and tested methods.
Blimey, I do go on......anyway Sue, I thought this was a beautiful moving write and anyone trying to get over someone will identify with every word.
I have to keep coming back to read it......which is unusual for a fitgit like me.
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A beauty of a poem full of meaning and how well I
know the feelings expressed therein.
Blimey, I do go on......anyway Sue, I thought this was a beautiful moving write and anyone trying to get over someone will identify with every word.
I have to keep coming back to read it......which is unusual for a fitgit like me.
Walk on Sue.
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God Bless
Michelle~