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Your One and Only
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I wrote this when a friend announced she was engaged, so happy I could not believe it, since the man in question had nothing to offer and never would. Is it really better to be with just anyone rather than to be alone????


I’m offering you love he said
But I turned away in scorn
Don’t offer me that old carrot and stick
I don’t’ bite so easy anymore
But where is your romantic heart he asked
Underneath every logical bone in my body
I answered in truth
You offer me love
But what you want is someone to make your bed
And wash your clothes
You offer me your life
But you haven’t worked in years
And hope sincerely that I will continue
But I love you he insisted
And I thank you for the emotion I reply
But I must turn down the offer of forever
I’m too afraid you really mean it
And forever is way too long
To be your one and only

  

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 Reviews of "Your One and Only"
Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 22, 2007
well done

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Time will tell all. In the mean while, one can only wish her well.

Peace and sunshine

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
in a one-sided relationship, forever is much to long ... it's best to live in the moment ...

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Thank You for this!! I've met more than a few men in my life just like that. And I have a friend always trying to hitch me up with all her "friends" just like this.!!!! She has a lot of them.!!! : ) Thanks!! now I have the words, if it's ok with you, to use.!!!1
Have the Warmest and Happiest Holidays Filled with Much Love and Happiness and Peaceful Memories.
Heaven's Love Tracey

Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Good poem and sensible message. But people are gonna do what they're gonna do:>)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on November 26, 2004
Like Tina Turner said, “what’s love got to do with it? It’s just a second hand emotion!” It’s an excellent message for your friend. Hopefully she’ll heed the important warning and danger signs.


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