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Someday
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He said it wasn’t a baby
It was just a seven day overdue period
His words sliced into her heart
And into the core of her dreams
She had believed him when he said he loved her
And talked of the family they would have
Someday
That’s the thing of it he said
Not noticing the tears in her eyes
Someday is not now
And I’m not ready right now
And he walked away
No thought of what they had created
The beauty of a child borne of their love
He tossed the thought away like an old tissue
And she felt the same way
Used and dirtied, then tossed away
Because it wasn’t the right time
Because it wasn’t
someday

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Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 30, 2005
Sue, my friend,
I don't know if this is from a personnel experience or not but I feel the pain of it in your words. I can look into my minds eye and see the tears on your cheek and my arms long to hold you as a friend and tell you all will be ok.

A big hug,
Your friend...Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Truth is often not happy. Well done, Sue. You are dealing with life and sharing your input which we appreciate. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Sue, I'd have to agree with Eileen. You truly do have a way of breathing life into...well...life. A great poem.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
this about sums it up, Sue. nicely done!
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
This seems to be scenario quite often these days Sue. Unfortunately most walk away, whether there really is a baby or not.
Truly a sad depiction of life.

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
Outstanding piece Sue!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
A splendid write Sue.

Take care

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2005
I know a couple that is going through this and I really feel for the woman ... Another great write from you, Sue ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Sue you write these real life experiences better than anyone I know. Your blogs are great too!;-)

Eileen

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
These kind of persons give the majority of men a bad name.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Yes it is a sad day but you know what when he said it to me. I just said keep on going. Mine is thirty five and the only one that I had. Poignanat write Sue.

Reviewed on January 28, 2005
Sue,

And it never will be. :( Heartwrending, powerful write--poignantly penned.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 28, 2005
A truly sad scenario, Sue.


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