It doesn’t matter if it rhymes
As long as the words
Run like honey off the tongue
As long as the words
Create pictures in the mind
And stir longings in the heart
Doesn’t matter if it rhymes
As long as the picture it creates
Can be seen without the eyes
And the song it sings
Can be heard without the ears
When words put together
Makes one reach for the stars
It won’t matter if it rhymes
If it makes the mind soar
This is one of your best pieces Sue and i think in your case it really doesn't ;matter, your work picks up its own rythem from the message not the rhyme. Well done.
All Really Matters Is: To Thine Ownself Be True...
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Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on February 1, 2005
Wonderful write! I'm trying to break away from the rhyming and I'm slowly getting there ... lol
"As long as the words
Run like honey off the tongue"
Love those lines!
To rhyme or not to rhyme, that is always a question for me. I love both. Good verse moves me whether it has rhythm and rhyme, or not.
Take care,
Sherry
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Bravo!
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"As long as the words
Run like honey off the tongue"
Love those lines!
It don't matter if it rhymes
Well Done
William .....Peace & Love
perfection, and I agree!;-)
eileen
i agree!!!
you done this quite
creatively!!
Take care,
Sherry