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Paranoia?
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Whispers
I hear them when I walk in the room
Voices
Just loud enough to draw attention
How I hate those sounds
The whispers
That I can never quite hear
But never really go away
Are they really there
Or a figment of my imagination
Whispers
So vague yet so damning
Are they there
Or am I crazy
Do people care enough to talk
Or do I over rate my importance
Whispers
Why do I hear them
And why won’t they go away

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 Reviews of "Paranoia?"
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Sue,

Enjoyed the way you described the ongoing battle--love katy's ideas and this write. Many, including me, hear them, too...

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
MMMMM... Sue, don't listen to the brain demons that suggest whispers in a room are about you... OR... next time you perceive someone is whispering about you: take one giant step forward, lift up your head proudly and say, in your loudest voice, "I HEARD THAT!" It unnerves them, indeed. (smile)

Better yet, just ignore them... my son battles daily with paranoid schizophrenia and depression. Knowing and loving him has made me keenly aware of how lucky we are to be able to walk away from our own imaginings and paranoia. It only causes harm if you let it.

I loved the way you used the one-word verses, followed by succinct, straight-forward backup phrasings. katy xox.


Reviewed by Janet Parker
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Rebuke them. Speak out loud to them and tell them to leave you alone in the name of God. Very good write.

Reviewed on February 4, 2005
A whisper, unless spoken in ones ear, is just lack of guts. Ignore them

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Most everyone can relate to this feelings. A wonderful write.

Love from india - Joel -

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Well Sue I do not believe you are paranoid as I have heard these whispers too. There is an entire movie made about this and it was called White Noise.

Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
I did hear those kind of voices after giving birth to my baby boy...
Small world, isn't it?
Safi

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
I took this as the "whispers" you hear from other people when you walk into a room and not the whispers or voices in your mind. People will talk and I usually don't care. ;) Great write as always, Sue ...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Must be a terrible feeling but medication may help those that suffer this mental disease.

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
I'm deaf so I don't hear voices,LOL,but I do have a few aspects of my personality that vie for attention all the time. All sorts of inner battles can ensue. When you see me talking to myself, you can assume I am mediating. It has nothing to do with insanity. And everything to do with staying sane. :)
I can relate to the cleverly crafted *Paranoia*.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Most interesting...those voices can be sleezy at times too!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Now this is a write we can all relate to so well. I think everyone unless they are a complete ego maniac has some form of paronoia and you have said what a lot of us (especially writers) feel.

Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Oh those voices, I never let them lead me anywhere I don't want to go, although every now and then I do allow them their say...Ed

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
What???? wait a minute, are you guys telling me that everyone doesn't hear 'the voices'? :}

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Excellent psychological mystery! Good one Sue!

etw

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
It's just a chemical trick of the brain. One of my mates has these, in her bi-polar.
Ignore them babe, no-matter what they say. hope the Dr can sort it out..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Whispers aren't necessarily always from evil-minded people; they could be from friendly spirits who are trying to convey some message to you; or they could even be from your poetic muse.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
I think they would stop if you walked into the room carrying a fully-loaded assault weapon and a glint in your eyes that you meant to use it on the first whisper of a whisper. LOL

Reviewed by Carrie Deveney
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
hmm...an interesting piece almost sounds like someone dealing with schizophrenia. Very good poem.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 4, 2005
Sue, those aren't whispers..it's just the goodness moving about in your soul, to protect you from the bitterness of the world.
Keep listening though, sometimes they send wonderful messages.

Lisa


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