The 'I Want' Dance (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

I want more money, but I keep getting more work in stead. LOL!
Excellent write, Sue. :o)

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Time is the one thing you can't get enough of.
Nice work

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

"Now I just want more...
time"

Oh yeah that's my desire because
you can never get enough. I don't think.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Great write Sue!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Funny how life treats us this way; just doesn't seem fair.

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

I can relate. I'm at the saturation point where acquiring things doesn't mean anything. I think we "want" to try and fill up something empty inside of us. Very good write.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Yeah, time has away of getting ahead. Great write.

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 5, 2005

Exquisite! I want iwant I want. More time yeah. Goes by too fast
Super message Beautiful poem Thank You Sue You need to let this one be seen by all!
Love Tracey xoox

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

isn't it strange how time is our best friend and our worst enemy?

excellent write ...

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Profound ending!

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

"The 'I Want' Dance" sings memories of emotions throughout its wise lines, and convey a profound message.

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Wise words in your creative offering, Sue. Thank you. Regis

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Yes this one does have a great deal to say and yes I want more time.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Perfect Sue, and time is the one thing only one can give you, may he smiile favorably on your request.

Felix

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Cute and yet very perceptive ending.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Superb Sue! methinks we all know the I want dance
and this generation does it better than any!

etw

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

We are only given one day at a time, how we use it s up to us. We have become a sedentary society with more overweight people than ever before as a result of the amount of free time we now have.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Yes.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 4, 2005

Sue,

LOL--a wonderful, thought provoking write--and the last two lines--SPOT ON!!! Enjoyed--

I'm with you on this one--

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)