Tell me a story of love
And I’ll make it rhyme
Give me your tomorrow
And it can be so sublime
Show me your dream
And I’ll turn it to prose
Give me the seeds
I’ll grow you a rose
Just start at the beginning
I’ll create the end
Give me the ingredients
I’ll make them all blend
We can be happy
With very little trying
We can have years
Without all the crying
If you’ll paint the picture
I’ll make it rhyme
If you’ll make the effort
I’ll take the time
I hear a song Sue. Is he within earshot? I bet after reading this poem, that you have spent a better part of your life making something from nothing, and doing it beautifully,too. I like this very much...
this is good stuff, I especially like the ending.......
and btw I read your blog.......
I agree completely........some of poetry is reality, some is not, some is just plain old drama, and words......people should know better and take things that way....we are mostly adults here
good pen Sue!
pax A
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 15, 2005
Yes this is pretty good and you did well with this one.
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"Sublime" is sublime - excellent!!
Blessings,
Robert
John
Love from India - Joel -
Love Tinka
and btw I read your blog.......
I agree completely........some of poetry is reality, some is not, some is just plain old drama, and words......people should know better and take things that way....we are mostly adults here
good pen Sue!
pax A
Hugs,
Felix
I’ll make it rhyme
And you did it very well.