I Want You (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

It's all been said Sue, I think this is a sensual masterpiece!

etw

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

very sensuous and conceptually fantastic poem ...

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Passion, excitement... truly erotic, in a very sensual way...

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Oh~~~captivating
reminds me of an image I saw of a woman laying on her back
nude but you had to look really hard to tell it was of a naked
woman it looked like a nature shot of hills(her breast)
waters/rivers (her hair) a valley(her pocketbook:)) it was beautiful
just like this poem!!!

Reviewed by John Bidwell

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Very very good writing.
It is wonderful to be so captured and taken for a ride, and land on earth.
John

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Very erotic yet tasteful piece that you have done so well. Love it.

Felix

Reviewed by Eddie Arce (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

"I want to be the geography
Of your life"

Originality at its finest!

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

This is a tastefully erotic and very romantic poem, Sue. As far as centering is concerned, you have to enable the editor which then seems to mess with the font and size of at least one line of my poem everytime I use it. There is no easy solution that I know of,sorry. I have been told that if you set up the editor and type your poem directly into the add poetry box that it works well, though I always try to take the easy way out and use cut/paste which doesn't work very well.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I want to be the geography
Of your life

And it seems that you have studied this subject well.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

This is an exciting write and I did not find anything to edit.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

This is a beautiful write.

Reviewed by Carrie Deveney

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Very passionate poem! Full of energy...very good. :)
-Carrie

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

The imagery is superb in this sensual write.

Reviewed by Fritz Barnes

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

Oh, my....Sue you went and got me all excited. This is supposed to help me focus on my work? :)

Very, very nice.

Peace,

Fritz

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

You romantic you!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on February 18, 2005

I haven't figured out that one yet, I have resigned to lining up my darlings aginst the wall. I love this poem! It's sensual and exotic.
"I want to be the geography of your life..." Beautiful...