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Lost Thoughts...
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My mind is wandering today...I could discover the answer to world peace and I would forget it before I told anyone...ever have days like that??

I wish there were something I could say
That has never been said before
Something that would touch the mind
And overwhelm the spirit
I want to be the one to make a difference
To stake a claim on this thing called life
But instead I go from day to day
Writing poems
And thinking deep thoughts
That will never find paper
Because they fade away before I can capture them
These thoughts so deep
That I hardly think them
Before they are gone
Lost forever
But I’m sure
They were intensely vital
If I could only remember
What it was
I forgot 

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 Reviews of "Lost Thoughts..."
Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 25, 2005
I think we all share this problem as writers and poets and like sand slips through an hour glass the more we try to hang onto these thoughts the faster they slip thrrough.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 25, 2005
Yip but lately I write it in the back of my hand...or make a knot in my ear..but sometomes I still forget!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Loved the ending...very realistic write....BHUWAN

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
I agree with Andy but sometimes I do believe my mind wanders around in the desert or disappears.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Use a journal...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Don't we all know this feeling!;-) You say it so well!
Another good one Sue!

Eileen

Reviewed by George Jackson
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
Yeah I have days like this...often lol. But this is a very good poem,Sue. Nothin' wrong with your thinker here=0).

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
This is very special.
Your comment cracked me up.
It reminds me I go around saying..."I should have listened to my mother." And people always ask, "Why, what did she say?"
And I say, "I don't know, I didn't listen."
:)
John

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
I guess the Native-American 'Dream-Catcher' does'nt work for poems... :)

Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
I have often done that, now what was that again, oh, I forgot (giggles). Then when I'm asked what did I forget, I say oh that, well it was nothing (giggles again). may the Lord be with you always, and be constantly at your side. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), your sister in the written word, and in Christ our Lord, your very dear friend in Wisconsin,

Barbara Lynn Terry
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on February 24, 2005
You've read my mind. Great write.


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