Shhhh... (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Joel Raja Kumar J (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Reminds me of a Herold robin's novel I read in which an English man would invite whores to his bed and then kill them just when the women are havign their ecstasy. Almost the same reason, almost.

Love from India - Joel -

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Chilling indeed!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

A voyage into the delusional mind of a serial killer. Sends shivers...

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Wow that's definately a chilling.

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Spine chilling words here Sue, powerful and well written...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Extremely chilling, and very good, Sue.

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on March 23, 2005

Brilliant, Sue.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

the inside of delusions
coined here perfectly!!!!
makes me shudder...............
you brought it here!!!

on another note been thinking alot about Scada
miss her, hope all is well with her

Reviewed by Judith Pleasant

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Very interesting write. Very into the mind of dangerous people.
It is amazing how much motheres actions have on their children. Good and bad.
Blessings,
Judith

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

So chilling and powerful, excellent,

Reindeer

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

very powerful ...

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

There's Perverts & There's Perverted Voices & There's Voices If You Listen You Won't Get Be Killed By Serial Killers Or Any Perverts Or Any Bitch Who Should Have Killed Him 1st...

Problem With Serial Killers Is Voice They Hear Is There Very Own Alone
Only Few If Any Tell Them Tell Them To Kill Themselves (Suicide)To Kill Themselves--If They Do They Won't Get It(Sexual) Off Killing Other Innocent People...

Unique N Different Write Right On...

PS: OLD TORT COMMENT:

ONLY REASON MOST PEOPLE (PSYCHOS) ARE ALIVE IS IT IS ILLEGAL TO SHOOT THEM...
TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Extremely troubling ,because of how perceptiive it is!
I'm sure many parents would cringe and deny, how
much they have damaged their children.
outstanding poem on the topic Sue!

etw

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Wow this is really powerful and you got us with the powerful imagery.

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

i thought you were writtn' 'bout me.

well written piece. you led up to the ending perfectly.
TX

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

I have to agree with Felix, sis. This is a very insightful view to the dark ravings of a madman. The mind is such a fragile thing, and it does have its breaking point. Great write sis. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy tot he world, peace on earth & ((((HUGS)))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

wow! Sue this is a great write

William .....Peace

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on March 22, 2005

Good glimpse into the mind of a pshycotic? killer. Scary how someone anyone can only be driven to their breaking poit. Good capture Sue.

Felix