Write Me a Poem (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Patricia Gomes

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

Perfect! By using short lines, you put the reader in mind of a "quickie." That was a brilliant trick!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

So your the one that got that den all heated up LOL ;-) Fun write.

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

LOL.Ed That's rich! You mean the head banging stuff.
So will you make fun of me if it's too tame. ;)

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 22, 2005

Step up La Belle Sue!! Think you've just put your finger (??!!) on what we've all bin missing!! But, you know, a lot of it is in the mind/eye of the beholder anyway, so suggest you get your specs adjusted and read between a few lines here and there... I'm sure it's all goin on and, since you wrote this yesterday, your inbox and message board must be fair jammed!! So, "if you can't be good, be careful"... as my VERY naughty Granny used to tell me... we will all certainly be watching this space!! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

I wish I could forget as well as you Sue!;-) hahaha great poem!

Eileen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

Been so long since I've had sex that I get excited at the crack of dawn...Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

lol! a poem like this could only come from experience ;)

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

Hahahaha!!!!! Sue! Sue! Sue!...I have the pages hidden somewhere!...but they're too hot to be posting it here in the den... :)

Good sensual write and that's almost like a scream. Well-done indeed!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

Hmmmmnnnnn I think you just did it yourself and took half the male poets on the den wiith you. Very funny but very hot at the same time, good one Sue.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

Lol Sue, frustrsated huh? check out 'I dream of you' 'Succubus' is quite hot too...excellent write.

Keep an eye out for some hot ones coming from the den of iniquity soon...lol

Paul;-]

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

I think your memory just came back. Definitely stirred mine. Thanks for the fun:-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 21, 2005

"Bongotty " thoughts bugging you huh?

Hehehehehe.....tell it like it is right?!!

Love Tinka