Erotica is not to everyone's taste and I don't want to offend anyone. If you are easily offended, don't read this poem...if you are easily turned on...read on
I waited
Under that rough and tattered
Patchwork quilt
The smell of my wanting
Permeating the room
Leaving its musty scent
A trail for you to follow
My breath comes lightly
As I anticipate your touch
Breasts heaving
Nipples erect
I tremble with the need
As I feel you in the room
And my breath becomes ragged
My body rises
Awaiting the touch of your hands
Your mouth
Your breath is warm
My body is hot, steaming, craving
I turn over, stretch , rise up on my knees
And looking back over my shoulder
I invite you in
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Reviews of "Erotica...an answer to Alexandre"
Reviewed by Kathleen Herrick (Reader)
Reviewed on May 14, 2005
This is a deluxe sauna bath for the menfolk but, I liked it well enough myself. Phew... who broke the heat valve?
Oh great now I need another cold shower, first Alex, then you...do you guys mind, I am so clean now that I may not have to take anymore showers for a few days...;) Ed
Well I think this is abslolutetly funtastic and I just wish it was me that was you were looking back to see. Hot and steamy is pretty mild for this one Sue, great write.
Felix
In the second book of the BetterWorld trilogy, Kiyoko and her friends continue to fight MediaCorp's schemes to control the world. But a team of ruthless mercenaries is after them, and is closing in fast.
In the gripping finale of the BetterWorld cyberpunk series, Waylee, Kiyoko, and their friends attempt to bring down an all-powerful corporation and a corrupt government--all while eluding the biggest manhunt in history.
>;-)...
eileen
:)
John
You work is still filled with an intense fire
that never seems to go out! DON'T ever let anything
put it out, it is way too much fun and exciting!
You got everyone's attention (including mine) with this steamy write--good show!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Paul;-]
Love Tinka
Felix