It was just a passing moment
A crowded elevator
A good looking man in tight jeans
I entertained myself
Watching his ass as the floors moved up
Just as we reached my floor
He turned and caught me
With a sexy wink
He held the door for me
And even though it was just
A passing moment
It made me smile
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Reviews of "A Passing Moment"
Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2005
It makes me smile too! ;) Great poem, Sue ...
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on May 29, 2005
Here I am . . . Doing you! I liked this. A bit different kind of poetry I have come to expect from you and the different is good.
Isn't it always a bit of a thrill to know that we can still catch the eye of another and tweak their sexual and our own sexual feelings if only in passing. I don't htink it is a sin to think this way even when happily married or in love I think its just a normal part of the human body.
good for you Sue to recognize and understand this.
Felix
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good capture, Sue ...
You've made me smile...and given me back a few of those passing moments of my own!
Loved this!
Lisa
Eileen
~Linda
is a passing moment that lasts.
lol just keep watching I say.
good for you Sue to recognize and understand this.
Felix
As did I. :) What an image! LOL
Love this one--saving it to enjoy again and again. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
ROFL, yeah that'll do it every time, you devil woman.
Thanks for the smiles. ~~Nordette
Love Tinka