Don’t kiss me
If you can only kiss me goodbye
Keep your I love you’s
If you aren’t going to stay
Being loved from afar
May be fine in some story
But I want my loving close at hand
Where I can feel it late at night
I want your kisses
To wander down my body
Not a bunch of x’s
At the end of an email
Stay with me or say so long
I don’t want your kisses
If they are only goodbyes
There is much truth in this write, Sue. It is always difficult to see a loved one leave, especially when in some instances, they are leaving only to never again return. I guess we can only keep them with us if they wish to stay, but parting is never easy.
Powerful and strong write with a very clear message.
Thanks,
Jill
bravo. well said. well read.
afterall, who wants an email romance?
hard ta' dance
to that tune.
TX
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2005
Heartbreakingly astute is the premise behind the words of this very well-written little poem. Socially unacceptable are the idea of loving from afar because loving words are one thing, but loving hands are quite another.
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nicely done.
Cris
Powerful and strong write with a very clear message.
Thanks,
Jill
Amen. :) A powerful write--very well penned!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Felix
afterall, who wants an email romance?
hard ta' dance
to that tune.
TX
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