Enough, I Say (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 25, 2005

an honest take on your attitude ... there's always a sun behind those clouds ...

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Wonderful write, Sue. Not every poem is sunny and that is okay. We poets write from the hearts. Good job!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Awesome poetry. Well done, Sue.

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

"But give me the clouds
I hate too much sun "

Ahhhhhhh... kindred spirit O' mine! Them's my kinda wishes, too.

Now, Sue, there is self-effacing and THEN there's that last line up there. Sigh... your assignment, should you choose to accept it, is to reread this... I dare you not to find the great worth that I found. Your meter and rhyme are flawless. You've penned with simplicity and rendered impact! There's truth and humanity in them thar words, madam. Why, I almost saw your tongue in your cheek. Yep! I read it twice! (smile) katy xox

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 23, 2005

Yip my life is so dark I can start a mushroom farm...want to join me and be a partner??

Lol!!

Speak your heart and be honest I say!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

dark and light are the same thing...they are just seperated by shades of gray...gray sounds nice..right in the middle.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

Portrayed the blues so well!

"I smiled once this week
So give me a break ..."

Love that! Sometimes, we do feel like that! "Just let me be!" you want to scream. Aaagh!! Well penned, Sue!

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Brian Pellerino

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

Suzy,

We write what we know and we know what we write> The darkness is just more comfortable for some of us...

Peace,

B

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

LOL Sue you are just a real ball of happiness inside that gloom and doom writers head of yours and admit you enjoyed the happy ones too.

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

Nuttin' wrong with gloom and doom. Whot? We ain't Ward and June Cleaver, are we? I always liked the clouds myself . . . don't you imagine that guy . . . Whot's his name . . . Writ all them thar spooky . . . Yeah, Poe, ole Edgar Allen, don't you imagine he liked a nice dismal cloudy day?

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

did i write this?

well said. well read.

warned ya' didn't i
TX

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

I smiled once this week
So give me a break

And a break you shall have, write on Dark Poet!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on July 22, 2005

Even shit is wonderful fertilizer for your roses. Just watch out for the little pricks on the stems.