He has a country accent
So thick you can cut it with a knife
A cigarette in one hand
A comb in the other
I always thought it would be the nicotine
That got him in the end
Or a car wreck on those windy country roads
He always drove like a maniac
He climbed higher trees than anyone I knew
When we were kids
And was the first one of us to get a pocket knife
Something he always made sure
We didn’t forget
He was the other older brother
I grew up thinking I had two of them
Cousin was just a word
I followed them off the barn roof
And we all lived thru it
I lit up that first stolen cigarette
Right along with them
Although I later had the sense to quit
I was still right behind them
Right or wrong
It’s going to be a smaller world
Without him in it
I’ll probably never go fishing again
It seems a small thing to give up
In memory of a man
Who was such a big part of my life
A wonderful well written poem of precious memories of a departed loved one. May your life wound soon heal.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
You know, Sue, we writers are often saying we "relate" to a piece... this one made me feel included, shared with, part of it.
With open verse, your narrative absorbed me into it, like two people sitting quietly, speaking in low tones.
The line about not fishing anymore, so personal, seemingly a small thing, defined this for me. The simple act of living life has many accents that matter only to us and those who we know. You invited me in and this one will linger... one of your very best, for me. katy xox
I wouldn't give up fishing, I'd just take my pole and my memories, and go more often.
Losing somebody we love, and admire, puts us where we don't want those we love to have to ever be.
Not only are your emotions real, they are surreal as well. I'm so sorry for your pain Sue, and I'm also sorry Charles didn't go for those checkups. You're right..ignoring something, doesn't make it not real.
Sue this is a classic, so masterfully understated! Kudo's! Condolences on your loss, I've had similar, and know how deeply the bond goes. Blessings to you!
Geez I broke my arm jumping from a tree...playing with the boys...still have the 5 inch - 7 stitched scar where the doctors had to put pins in to safe me from losing my hand!!
Love Tinka
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2005
Some people do enrich our lives, and leave such a good lasting impression. Nicely done Sue..
Poiquent and sad, but with a tilt of "what-the-hell" attitude about it, kinda the way Charles would have wanted it, most likely. Very good. Sorry for your pain.
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Great character sketch!
With open verse, your narrative absorbed me into it, like two people sitting quietly, speaking in low tones.
The line about not fishing anymore, so personal, seemingly a small thing, defined this for me. The simple act of living life has many accents that matter only to us and those who we know. You invited me in and this one will linger... one of your very best, for me. katy xox
Losing somebody we love, and admire, puts us where we don't want those we love to have to ever be.
Not only are your emotions real, they are surreal as well. I'm so sorry for your pain Sue, and I'm also sorry Charles didn't go for those checkups. You're right..ignoring something, doesn't make it not real.
Lisa
Eileen
Charles came vividly to life in my mind's eye as I read your descriptive words...very well done, I'm sorry for your loss. :(
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Geez I broke my arm jumping from a tree...playing with the boys...still have the 5 inch - 7 stitched scar where the doctors had to put pins in to safe me from losing my hand!!
Love Tinka
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Felix