She walked thru the door
Ready to take on the world
Come on she thought
Just one more s.o.b. walks over me
Or into me
Like I don’t exist
And I’m gonna explode
Or implode
Either way, I’m going to be out there
In little bitty pieces
It’s just the way my day has gone
Nothing big
Just every little thing on this earth
Out to destroy me
I can’t take it she thought
And at that moment
A little girl turned her head and smiled
Gapped toothed happiness
In a 5 year old hello
And suddenly the world didn’t seem so bad
As she hugged her daughter to her heart
She realized nothing could get her here
Sweet! Warms the heart. Long time no see, Sue Hess. One of us has been in hiding. I confess, it was me. :-) ~~Nordette
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
BEAUTIFUL!!!
REALLY GREAT POEM!!
LOVE WRITTEN EXPRESSION AS THIS IS FANTASTIC!
True Children are our most precious Existence and we must always
love and protect them ...because they possess a special closeness
to all things holy.....maybe because they've just left Heaven?
Excellent!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2005
There's something in this. I gave an old lady a smile in the bank as she was walking out. She turned to me thanking me for making her day..
The innocence of a child will put the power of "life sure is worth it" into perspective everytime. When you see a child smile, you know that life's planting of future seeds is so worth while. Good thoughts on this 'save the day' Sue!
Love, romance, innocence, intrigue, danger, and lust. Life is complicated, and love even more so. Life, and love, can be hazardous to a lady's health. Especially if she's fallen in love with a married pop star.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
REALLY GREAT POEM!!
LOVE WRITTEN EXPRESSION AS THIS IS FANTASTIC!
True Children are our most precious Existence and we must always
love and protect them ...because they possess a special closeness
to all things holy.....maybe because they've just left Heaven?
Excellent!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
An appropriate smile is free, yet priceless..
Out to destroy me
Amazing how children truly have a knack of often making things much better - they can be such wise beings sometimes.
abdi-Noor
Stunning write Sue.
Lisa
Love Tinka
Eileen
Sage
Felix
Regis
A warm and cozy feeling.
Thank you,
Bonnie