The Pilgrim (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 30, 2005

I agree with Mr. Kostro. Thanks for the warning, Sue. Love and peace.

Regis

Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper

Reviewed on October 26, 2005

I love big Macs too Sue, cool down to earth poeming

Reviewed on October 26, 2005

Delightful! You've put me in the holiday mood. Now, I wanna go shopping, I wanna go shopping ... but uh oh, I'd better save some money for the expected big heating bills or I'll be at the golden arches having Christmas dinner! LOL! I enjoyed the poem!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 25, 2005

Welcome me home
From whatever wilderness
Or mall

It truly is that time of year again - and that dreaded mall is truly a maddening wilderness to me - I much prefer Mother Nature's wilderness!

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on October 25, 2005

I HAVE TO FESS UP...THIS IS POETIC LICENSE,i wait till the last minute too and i'm not even a big mcdonalds fan...this was just the product of a mood, and mcdonalds seemed the farthest thing i could think of from an old beacon bringing someone home from the wilds. i love you guys by the way...

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on October 25, 2005

You've finished your Christmas shopping? I had to go look at the calendar, to make sure it wasn't Christmas Eve, and I'd missed it! Gees Sue! Now I know who to hire to put my life in order.
And to think I was just sitting here thinking I needed to go buy my Halloween candy.......early!
Hope you enjoyed that Big Mac!

Lisa

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

I'll pass on the big mac but it is nice to see the season of love approaching

Felix

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

:() ~! Thank you for the big smile I am smiling. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

No you should have that healthy chicken and salad thingy....

Reviewed by Steve Patterson

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

Baahh-Humbug!

but, nice write

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

Great imagery, Christmas shopping? What's that?;-)...lol

Eileen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

Good .....i did not even make a start....hate it to do Christmas shopping...with....money,money,money....I ain't got!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

Finished Christmas shopping? And I thought I could be early LOL. Yes the fast food resturants can be a blessing at the end of a busy day. Thanks for the sharing.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on October 24, 2005

McDonalds is great inspiration to go Christmas shopping. Those golden arches are spiritual guidance to the hamburger angels with nice buns! Don't do what I did! I went through the drive-through and ordered a Whopper! "Ma'am ... we don't sell Whoppers, that's Burger King. Would you like a Big Mac instead?" I turned as red as the ketchup and sped off to Whopperland!

Sage