When you really think you miss me
Remember that night
In December
When you said you never wanted
To see me again
Or that
Time at your brother’s
When the wine
Went to my head and I danced
On the coffee table
To entertain
Your father and obviously not,
Your mother
When the nights seem long and lonely
Remember
How long they can be when I’m whining
Complaining because
You never talk to me anymore
Five minutes
Before I ask you to leave me alone
And quit pushing me
To open up
When you wonder if I’m ever coming back again
Remember
When you wondered if I would ever
Go away
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Reviews of "Count Your Blessings"
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 13, 2006
Only sad thing is you didn't break the coffee table..
Reviewed by Only A Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
very clever and enjoyed. go ahead and gloat you deserve it!
LOL well, well, well,this is sure a divergence from your usual work Sue and I must say it caught my attention like a hammer to the head...dancing on the table for his father? Hmmnnnn love to hear more about this wild side of you. Regardless a great write and you sure drove your message home to him no doubt.
Felix
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on January 12, 2006
Twist that knife in just a little more and deeper, Sue.
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He sounds an ungrateful son of a bitch !
Peter