unsaid words (poem) by Sue Hess on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on January 16, 2007

stark!!!
and raw and real
sometimes that is how it is

Reviewed on January 11, 2007

i think of tough world. well-done and short thanks for sharing

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Remembering the past should help us in our future endevours. The poem stands well as a description of a state of mind. Victor

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

thank you all for your great reviews...i have to tell you though that i wrote this from memory, my days of one night stands ended long ago...but i must confess i had a few of them back when..it was part of the seventies i guess

Reviewed by Approximately Naive

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

The first three lines convey sadness as the outcome of this 'just another one night stand'. So much relationship potential must surely be lost in many a one night stand. I must have felt it myself way back when.
Poignant poem

Reviewed by H. Lena Jones

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

This is so sad, Sue. You express much sadness and disappointment in this unfortunate experience. It is not fair is it? I feel your pain.

Much love...
Lena

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

As I read your poem I can't help but feel that you
Regret that it turnout to be a one night stand
I feel that you actually where hoping for a relationship.
Well you have really capture a stunning picture with your words
Of the perfect one night stand!
Excellent job!!
Love and Peace to You Always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Jacqueline Marshall (Reader)

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

I get a sense of regret as I read your poem. A real slice-of-life verse. Thanks. JM

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

Brilliant...you've said so much in just a few words!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on January 6, 2007

Wow...
Sue you are getting better and better at these short snappy verses that say so much with so little.

Fee

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Very sad and full of dissapointment.
Excellent,
Michael

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

This particular poem seems to be full of hurt, and a heartfelt cry was not heard. God Bless, Holly

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

so very powerful--the experience as well as the write--well done, you have captured it well

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Tragedy when a one night stand robs emotions and passion.

Susan

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 5, 2007

Wow, this is dynamite, Sue. Short and to the point, you've captured the one night stand perfectly -- again, a dynamite poem, excellently crafted.
Love,
CJ