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The Wrong Way
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I wrote this to chide my sister about always being right and seeing me as always being wrong...i wonder if she is right? Never mind

Push me, pull me
Feel free
I’ll never go the right way
On my own
I have a built in instinct for wrong
Wrong way
Wrong time and place
Wrong words
It’s the one thing I can get right
I’m usually wrong
I try
But never very hard
It’s just in my nature to do it this way
And I have so many years
Of practice
At being wrong
What a waste if suddenly I started being right
Without your help, of course
So go ahead
Push me to do the right thing
And I probably will
Just because you were there
And kept me in line
Push me, pull me
But make sure you are right
I can be wrong on my own

 

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 Reviews of "The Wrong Way"
Reviewed on March 6, 2007
Wonderful.

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
Reviewed on March 5, 2007
know people like that always right no matter if their wrong
enjoyed this
but you gotta luv them right?

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2007
We all have shared the wrong way,
but can always do right...
Enjoyable write..

Reviewed on March 4, 2007
Your poetry gives on so m uch meaning that you have to recieve positive feedback from all that review. Thanks for sharing with me and many others here on the lovely Den.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on March 4, 2007
Great pen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 4, 2007
I have a built in instinct for wrong
Wrong way
Wrong time and place
Wrong words
It’s the one thing I can get right

And I think many of us - are right there with you!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 4, 2007
Welcome to my world of wrong doings.....lol...happy to know I am NOT the only one!!

love tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
Hmmn interesting way to look at things but I think should not always allow someone to so easily control. The last two lines show though that you will only allow control to go as far as you choose to let it go.

Fee

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
really good write/read and message. ending is perfect. luck with this one.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
Creative write my friend, enjoyed this much! I think we all feel this way at one time or another in our life! I know I have!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
Louisa

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
nice poem, i like the end as well

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on March 3, 2007
Great ending! Loved the concept and wonderful ending!


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