This poem won't come together for me so i'm posting it in hopes that I will re-read it and the answer to what is wrong with it will suddenly become clear...
I’ve spent more time in my life
Wondering why I feel the way I do
Than actually wondering how I feel
I often ask what makes me think that
Or why do I say the things I do
My life is an eternal question
Did I do this and should I do that
How can this be
And why should I care
What makes the world the place it is
And what brought me to this spot
How can I know so little
When I've been thru so very much
And last of all I can't help wondr'ing
Is there more to you and I
Than what we've found so far
Posting it 1st, LOOKIING at it LATER, is SMART, something jogs your muse loose, I know, I've done it!
Ahhhhh.. SEARCHING! NO doubt, and asking deep pondering questions!
I like it the way it is!
If you must change it, listen to your heart and feelings!
WArmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
I really like it! JUSt as I see and feel it!
Questions and contemplations are what our minds do and what sets us apart. Some especially poets and writers have a tendency to question and ponder more than others so I think you captured that essence here in this write very well and no changes are really necessary.
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Ahhhhh.. SEARCHING! NO doubt, and asking deep pondering questions!
I like it the way it is!
If you must change it, listen to your heart and feelings!
WArmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
I really like it! JUSt as I see and feel it!
Amor
Love Tinka
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