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Just Wondering
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This poem won't come together for me so i'm posting it in hopes that I will re-read it and the answer to what is wrong with it will suddenly become clear...

I’ve spent more time in my life
Wondering why I feel the way I do
Than actually wondering how I feel
I often ask what makes me think that
Or why do I say the things I do
My life is an eternal question
Did I do this and should I do that
How can this be
And why should I care
What makes the world the place it is
And what brought me to this spot
How can I know so little
When I've been thru so very much
And last of all I can't help wondr'ing
Is there more to you and I
Than what we've found so far 

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 Reviews of "Just Wondering"
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
Posting it 1st, LOOKIING at it LATER, is SMART, something jogs your muse loose, I know, I've done it!
Ahhhhh.. SEARCHING! NO doubt, and asking deep pondering questions!
I like it the way it is!
If you must change it, listen to your heart and feelings!
WArmly, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
STay POsitive!
STay SAFE!
I really like it! JUSt as I see and feel it!

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on July 5, 2007
i agree with Felix more or less. just read and re-read it and you'll see where a change or 2 might help. overall, it's good, good.

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 3, 2007
The wanting to know is what then makes us figure out in bits and pieces and continue to grow-i think you have done a pretty good job here

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Reads perfect to me...we all wonder about everything around us...we are a curious animal and constantly reach for what is beyond.
Amor

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Interesting write....I have been asking these same questions.....I think what we need is to just make peace with what's around us!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 2, 2007
Questions and contemplations are what our minds do and what sets us apart. Some especially poets and writers have a tendency to question and ponder more than others so I think you captured that essence here in this write very well and no changes are really necessary.

Fee


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