And so
The meal ends
just before it grows stale
Every ounce of taste
Has been squeezed from it
Every drop of drinkable
Juice
Gone down the throat
Of the gullible
Choking
Only if you fight it
Swallow
Its easier that way
Goes down smoothly
And you can
Smile
And say thank you
Saving face and
Pretending
It was just a snack
You wanted
Anyway
this poem was an answer to something once but occasionally i drag it out again because it fits.
Just a snack... cheap, fast, little nourishment... sounds like a lot of relationships to me. Great write.
Reviewed by Oisín Breen (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Excellent. Comes up very well. Nicely understood and well it was enjoyed
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Time for new food on the table to make the meal more succulent than before. What would you like it to be? Grape wine and caviar, or whiskey with coke and pretzels?
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Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Very cute and refreshing tablefare for anyone.
Reviewed by the phantom pheonix (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
Do I have to eat? I don't feel hungry right now? LOL great poem anyways beautifully done!!
Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2003
I don't tend to bite anything I can't chew first....Good write. Ty, Dani
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