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the last cheater's waltz (revised)
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A scented bath
began the ritual she had come
to know so well
powdered and perfumed
she chose her clothes carefully
knowing the impression she left
tonight
would have to last till the next time
and she wanted him
to remember her, everytime he closed his eyes
she wanted her scent
to stay on his mind, in his heart
she wanted her
smile
to haunt his dreams when he was away from her
as he always was
as she knew now he always would be
the pain was as fresh as when she first realized
he would never leave HER
but she couldn't stop
this dance they had begun
this liar's minuet
they danced so well together
this tango of passion they practiced
every chance they got
she couldn't walk off the dance floor
as long as the music still played
the last cheater's waltz

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Reviewed by Rodd Jokre (Reader)
Reviewed on October 1, 2003
You make the words come alive once again! Bravo!

Reviewed on September 29, 2003
(((sue)))

outstanding, beautifully penned piece--this flows like a song

(((HUGS))) and love,

karla. :)

Reviewed on September 29, 2003
wonderful write, sue; thanks for posting! makes me think of moe bandy; he had a hit called "the last cheater's waltz". (((HUGS))) and much love, your country music-lovin' texas friend, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
this is just so smooth and wonderful sue, just terrific to read, al

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 29, 2003
This is brilliant! Captures raw emotion in a powdered, perfumed facade.


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