There were people on the street
Watching me with dead eyes
No I wanted to scream at them
You can’t be dead because what would
That make me
I know I’m alive, my eyes haven’t lost their glow
But as I passed a mirror-like glass door
I glanced away
Not wanting to know for sure
"You can’t be dead because what would
That make me."
Wonderful, poetic depth.
But as I passed a mirror-like glass door
I glanced away
Not wanting to know for sure."
The human condition... not wanting to know for sure. Deep, deep, deep. This is an awesome write. A little punctuation may be helpful, but with or without it, this is the best thing I've read today.
yikes! a chilling write, for sure, but for as little as it is, boy does it EVER pack a WALLOP! WOW! BRAVA! well done, sue! (((HUGS))) and much love, your texas friend, karen lynn. :D
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That make me."
Wonderful, poetic depth.
But as I passed a mirror-like glass door
I glanced away
Not wanting to know for sure."
The human condition... not wanting to know for sure. Deep, deep, deep. This is an awesome write. A little punctuation may be helpful, but with or without it, this is the best thing I've read today.
no lost glow here. well done Sue.
Josie
Best regards,
Leland
excellent and profound
William
Reindeer
scary, intense write *chills*
"...i know i'm alive, my eyes haven't lost their glow
but as i passed a mirror-like glass door
i glandced away
not wanting to know for sure"
EXCELLENT! :)
(((HUGS))) and love,
karla. :) so much power in this small write! BRAVA!